"I want you all to make a Valentine
for someone special today."
The teacher enthusiastically said.
With craft paper, paper doilies, white paste,
a pen, and child's craft scissors,
to work we went with designs
rambling around inside innocent heads.
Valentine's Day was that day
and hurry we must. The room as
silent as it had ever been.
Little creative minds
diligently intent on their task.
Bobby Baker cut his paper into
the shape of a heart, glued it onto
the doilie and wrote: Marsha Ann
Will You
Be My Valentine?
When the time came he
handed it across the aisle to me.
I didn't care that he misspelled
my first name, and left the "e" off
the end of the second, 'cause
that day, I knew
Bobby Baker loved me.
Suddenly a mean boy grabbed my
treasured Valentine, ran around the room
yelling over and over
(please someone make him stop)
"Bobby Baker loves Marcia Anne
and he don't know how to spell."
Over and over he yelled it until the teacher
put him back in his seat... kerflop!!!
Then Bobby Baker looked at me and said,
"You're stupid! You're ugly! I hate you!"
while the others mimicked him with much glee.
But I didn't care what they said,
or how many times they said it, 'cause
on that special Valentine's Day
my wish had come true and,
I knew... if only for a little while
Bobby Baker loved me.
"...if only for a little while Bobby Baker loved me." you are one of the lucky ones!
Georg
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
I really love the way you brought the senses into this one. For a moment, I could smell the white paste glue (always loved the smell of that stuff). And this girl in the pic has such a sneaky predatorial look (like most females), and the boy has this ain't-I-the-greatest grin (like most males) LOL
The picture and poetry so preciously displayes sweet and innocent love as it should be always, I had a friend named Sue in Kindergarten, used to serenate her, many times the third floor window would open and some ice cold brew bring me back to my senses, me thinks it was her older brother. A beautiful portrait of valentine, still in its prime, well done Marcia! Jasmin Horst
OH you dear...I could picture the whole scene and it was so delightful until that nasty boy ruined it...but did he, for I still feel that Bobby loved you and probably always would...This was fantastic and took me back to grade school...and Craig Mintzer...oh I was in love...Thank you for the stroll back into time..Happy Valentines day I loved this treasure...Bonnie
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Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
hugs, Myrna
things that stick to us... 'if only for a little while'
but sometimes for a lifetime.
Hugs
Dale
Georg
Ted