Choosing Paths (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Choosing Paths
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Paraphrasing two similar thoughts one from the Tao # 53 "The greater way is easy, yet people prefer the unknown side paths" Jesus "Straight is the right path yet the crooked path to destruction is more heavily traveled." ~~~~ We can't choose the road to Creator after we are dead.So it is best to make our choice, then if we veer off the main course once in awhile, we at least have the opportunity to get back on, with His help. ~~~~ A fork in the road I must use precision I look right then left to make my decision I want to choose wisely which one I take I know one is real, while the other is fake One leads to Creator but what of the other Can't I just take a short trip,see what I discover Okay so temptation is making me daring It's fun to see what else there is without fearing I made a wrong choice now I must pay the piper Got stung by a bee and bit badly by a viper I lived through the worst of it got on the right road Wisely chose to get help to carry the load I'll watch very closely being guided by the son I may veer off ,but try to stay on the main one At least I know now I made the best choice On the road less traveled I can hear His voice eT

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on June 8, 2006

Very well put.!!! On the road less traveled, I can, at least, hear His voice. A title for another poem? Art

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 30, 2006

A beautiful expression of life and faith!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 29, 2006

continue on your wise path ... there are no wrong choices as long as we correct them ...

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on May 27, 2006

Wonderful poem
Full of faith
thanksfor sharing

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Yep, this isn't a time to flip a coin.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Eileen,
To follow Him, will never take us down the wrong road. That is the one thing I am certain of always.
It's good to be back. Back reading and enjoying all the beauty and talents therein.

Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

The Road Less Traveled is usually the best road of all.

Reviewed by A PAX

lol
bravo!!!

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

well done

Reviewed by Peter Paton

A tremendous remake of Robert Frost's classic " The Road Less Travelled "....
If it was me Eileen I would always take the right fork of the road...:)
Peter

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

We all must choose wisely. Lovely my Sister,
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Hmmm, a touch of Peck and Bunyann.
Yup just follow the son...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 26, 2006

Perssonally I think the right path looks more well trodden, but the left path may be more fun and elusive as less have used it...but if my Jeep won't fit on the path, then I will have to make it bigger...ed