I slowly took the beam the sun handed me and threw it across the bow of the ship that was sailing into the vibrant turquoise waters of your cerebellum sea
Awash in the splendor of stimulating thought, I sailed into the moodiness of your matchless mind, knowing I would find buried treasure more than a benevolent booty
Invigorating phrases captured me while verbs and nouns played tag with my senses leaving me breathless as I tried to keep up with the adjectives that made me dizzy
Seductive grey matter enticed my emotions with oceans of stimuli which caused a sweet syncopation that joined rhythm and rhyme to produce poetic fusion to the exclusion of all banality
We sailed on in the misty moonlight of verse luxuriating in the indigo night as stars shone bright upon our muse to infuse a myriad of bliss from the kiss of our first collaboration on into infinity
Aye ;) and you are an extraordinary wordsmith that takes us all on magnificent journies. Lost at sea with your pen again...lol...thank you so much for your writing. Every poem is an adventure into your precious soul.
Orgiastic expression of mind, spirit and body in a swelling sea of words that is pulled by the tides of cognitive thought. Full-sailed and free-flowing. Passionate and fecund, Eileen, thank you. Kate xx
"Your cerebellum Sea" & "seductive gray matter" certainly hints at the vast potential that lies in each one of us to use something finite to create and affect those around us with the sweet savor of infiniteness.
You are a prolific woman that stays true to her craft!
I read this last night upon my arrival home from work, and then again this morning, and find it too perfect to remark with humor...it is again just perfection all around...this one for me is a keeper...Peace, Poet...Ed & Rufuz
Captivating sublime write
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Reviewed by Nicoletta Poulakida (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Hi Eileen, got myself a bronze membership and now I'll try to comment and read here and post my work, I'm glad I found you and others here again.
As always the imagery is vivid and your poetry well written.
love
Nicoletta
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Sublime writing to the nth is this one. Sudective grey matter, indeed.
Eileen
You give us all much needed lightheartedness and levity of mind with this sassy and sparkling composition
You are at your best in this divine mood, and I love your choice of superb graphics...
Love and Light
Peter
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2006
You're back!
My favourite stuff when you share your most recent poems.
They are worth taking time over..
Sherry always crasps poems so excellently...
Mentally and emotionally stimulating, I found your verse to be captivating, Eileen. It made me want to be adrift upon the sea, napping in the sunlight to the rhythm of the sea, without a care in the world.
Take care,
Sherry
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B&R
ejoyed your profound talent
Thanks for sharing
William
Love & Peace
Peace,
Carolyn
Regis
Oh yeah! Sweet and savory word buffet. I'm going back for seconds and thirds!
Peace,
B
The opening lines captivate and draw the reader into your journey...a most beautiful one, indeed. One of your best, thank you! Definately keeping. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Xxx dove
love and peace, Carole
I love it!
SUsan
You are a prolific woman that stays true to her craft!
Richard
thanks for sharing
love and peace
As always the imagery is vivid and your poetry well written.
love
Nicoletta
Paul;-)
You give us all much needed lightheartedness and levity of mind with this sassy and sparkling composition
You are at your best in this divine mood, and I love your choice of superb graphics...
Love and Light
Peter
My favourite stuff when you share your most recent poems.
They are worth taking time over..
Sherry always crasps poems so excellently...
Take care,
Sherry