The cataract of scintillating lucid water caressed the mountainside lovingly as it flowed down into the canyon of lyrical dreams where it met the shallow shivering stream, then caught up with the river of rapid restoration that wended its way toward the omnipresent ocean of opulent opportunities, where all the waters would blend into one salubrious sea...I was sitting at the waters edge on the sandy beach awaitng the wondrous wave that would bring its miraculous healing powers to wash over me, tittilating my torso, and liberating my libido Ahhhhh--I wallow in waters of white-capped whimsy
This is magnificent...the images are magnified by the softness of the word useage which also magnifies the beauty in each line. "I was sitting at the waters edge, on the sandy beach, waiting the wondrous wave, which brought its miraculous healing powers to wash over me"...oh, what beautiful lines! This touched me so and brought me an uplifting feeling.
The beauty of Gods creations!
Absolutely brilliant your words captured
Such a peaceful feeling in this ode!
Bravo my friend!!
Love Peace and Hugsss.....Yolie
Eileen, This is remarkable..I love what you did here, very clever, very well thought out and very well written. Bravo!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Allow me to relax in the warm waters of this ceation. This is a soothing as a long soak with aromotherpay as a hint and the watertfall the perfect accompaniedment to relax my mind and be at peace. Wow! What a poem.
Thank you!
Love,
Susan
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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You took me from the mountainside to the ocean and let me wallow in the the waters of white-capped whimsy.
Kathy
Absolutely brilliant your words captured
Such a peaceful feeling in this ode!
Bravo my friend!!
Love Peace and Hugsss.....Yolie
Ron
Walt
love and peace, Carole~
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
love,
annie
Edwin
Thank you!
Love,
Susan
Masterfully penned, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.