He roams the universe
with wings of wonder
looking for whatever
pleases him to plunder
wild, free, full of thunder
She is land locked,fully frocked
wedded and embbeded
dreaming of the day
she can steal away
desires burning round the clock
One day while lying on the beach
she sees the eagle within reach
she lifts her arms in supplication
in the blink of an eye she's in the sky
soaring with him in illusions lullaby
Eilene, a heavenly experience if this beautiful write. The illusions lullaby a beautiful ending. You have a beautiful and gifted talent. It carries each of us as readers to a place where a gentle calmness blanket our souls.
Dear Eileen, What a wonderful talent to be able to make a nice poem on every subject. You are great and I share the view of my friend George Carroll
Signed: Emile
Fooling around on the beach? or fly with me? .... I liked the first lines, and then it got better, and then it flew away.....she I mean..
Blessings Eileen! Jasmin Horst
Artwork and writing... perfect literary marriage.
blessin's Sis ETW,
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Oh my,very beautiful writing sweet lady,stay safe and well..Hugssss
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Well! I should hope so, bettere than . . . er . . . Getting something in her eyes . . . Sorry, I couldn't help myself . . . To fly away is a wish we have all had I suppose . . . Sometimes, it happebs in the strangest ways . . .
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
with love
Ron
God bless you. Kathy
excellent Eileen...
John
I love the symbol of the eagle, those powerful wings and keen eye...it is a majestic raptor
Signed: Emile
lovely imagery
Love & peace be with you
William
Georg
Blessings Eileen! Jasmin Horst
wonderfully penned!
Cryssa
Newfie Irish Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Be always safe,
Karen
Love
Becca~
Love the poem...love the image!
Micke
(early Happy Birthday!)
blessin's Sis ETW,
cynth'ya