The softness
of the evening breeze
whispered over me
like a tease
The hush of night
covered me like a caress
bathing my skin with kisses
answering my secret wishes
The intoxication of indigo
like a champagne transfusion
seduces all my senses
adding to the illusion
Oh! magical moods of moonlight
with sprinkling of stardust
the hours of pure delight
that answer to the dreamers lust
etw-
Sheila
Ron
EDWIN
A joy to read!
like a champagne transfusion"
This kind of simile is unadulterated Eileen.
Wonderful!
No one perceives and writes quite like you do.
enjoyed this ... (-:
Blessings ...
Shouldn't we start to read your poems from now on under a cold shower?
Girl...you are moving the troops know hows! ! !
Brother Edvard
Delicate and delightful dream fantasy; "...whispered over me like a tease" ... is perfect.
John
Soft, gentle and quite loving.
Wonderful emotion and imagey.
Enjoyed very much.
Take care all the best Eileen,
~Gwendolyn
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
With Love,
Cindy