You ply me with praise in meadows
of daisies you speak poetry to my
soul and I shiver with delight
Your breath catches mine as
we transpose, heaven knows I'm
weak and can't resist and with your
first kiss, I'm all aglow
You fondle me with your gentle prose
and I'm primed to open like a rose
as a humming bird retrieving nectar
you elevate me to loves highest sector
We groan, having evolved into the storm
In all of the ways that lovers perform
into the glorious night of redemption
we take ourselves to heights of perfection
Reaching cresendo like seas lofty waves
crashing to shore then softly behaves
cuddling the waters edge as it retreats
then lying in stillness utterly replete
etw~
The feeling in this build and builds. Excellent write.
Sheila
Love & Light,
Joseph
Blessings and love,
Susan
Softly written from the heart.
ALways a joy to read.
DOUG
In all of the ways that lovers perform
into the glorious night of redemption
we take ourselves to heights of perfection
Such a sweet, sweet write, Eileen. Truly a lovely gift well-shared via your verses. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
washed over me as I read this, it exudes love and the fragrance thereof. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Carole~
John
Love and Blessings,
Christine
carolyn
Georg
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
...and all passion spent, "...lying in stillness utterly replete"...you move me, take me there... and I remember.
Thank you.
John
With Love,
Cindy