I guess my thoughts are of memories gone past of those who were once a part of our lives and now live in our hearts and minds.
In The Clouds
In the clouds are the pictures of you that I hold dear. The fond memories of a friendship, One with you who really care.
The pictures are so bright to ponder, A smile shared so wide and free, It almost makes me wonder if, This was really meant to be.
The clouds are like a daydream, A mist so fine is in the air, In this cloud that hold the pictures, Of the one I hold dear.
Where are you tonight dear, Do you rest your weary head, I vision pictures in the clouds above, As I too rest dear on my bed.
High in the clouds above the heavens, Where you are watching from up above. Always know that you were important, Always know how much you were loved.
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Reviews of "In The Clouds"
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
I loved the way that you made the symbolizism between the clouds and your memories. I too, catch myself every now and then looking to the sky to seek an answer from my dad or son or best friend that has passed on. Thank you for sharing, dear Rose.
Dear Rose, I can see what a great heart you have. The missed ones are closer than we think. They are always with us and within us. Thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Emile
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
Clouds are so wonderful
and the one you are remembering
had to be a wonderful person.
Stay safe Rose
Ron
The clouds have to many been somthing of a portal that we can look into and let our minds see what we wish to see, each one different and amusing and like the people in our lives always changing and eventually each must go it's own way. Yet like people we can look again and again and when we chose they will be there. Lovely write dear cousin and I know a lot of those you look towards the heavens to see are looking back at you and smiling at how much you mean to them.
hugs
Fee
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Sanja
Blessings,
Joyce B.
and the one you are remembering
had to be a wonderful person.
Stay safe Rose
Ron
Be well,
Sheri
ET
hugs
Fee
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Penned straight from the heart...beautiful memories, beautiful lines of longing, my (((friend))). Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
soothing write,,,
Love, Christine