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The Snow Falling Down
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In case I haven't mentioned it, I hate driving in heavy snow. I keep thinking I am an accident ready to happen not because of my driving but others on the road that don't know how to drive in bad weather. Too many think they can drive in bad weather the same as if they were on dry roads the hottest day in the summer, makes you wonder at times where they got their licence.


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The Snow Falling Down

I took you to the dealership,
To get your rental car to go,
I wasn't really the bravest,
I hate driving in heavy snow.
But I went without a word,
Not wanting to make you feel bad,
I kept my fear well hidden,
Although inside I wasn't glad.

I quickly kissed you on the lips,
As I carefully drove back home,
Watching all the other traffic,
Knowing I wasn't out there all alone.
I knew that I could make it,
Take my time, I'd be okay,
All I wanted was to park the car,
In the driveway for the day.

I walked up to my front door,
Turned to watch snow falling down,
I smiled now with much contentment,
At the snow upon the ground. 
Another day, I made it home,
The car is parked in my driveway,
I can rest now quiet contented,
At home for the day.


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Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on February 13, 2008
I believe that many who drive vehicles with 4-wheel drive believe that they are invincible. I, too, prefer the safety of my home. Glad you made it home safely.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
I can imagine all the agonizing you must have gone through. I used to leave my car parked, be it garage, driveway or along the curb and would take the bus or train instead, especially to work. You are so right that too many do not take heed when driving in snow and that I always found scarey. Fantastic write....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Yes sis I can understand your concern, thank God I don't drive, and wouldn't in the heavy snow we have been having. There are certainly a lot of drivers out there that don't value their lives or the lives of others and drive like they have no fear until its too late. But at least you made it home safe thank God. Beautiful write sis.

I love you sis, Selena

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
the snow had been relentless here--lots of white knuckle drives-i can sympathize with being so glad to be home

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Grab a book and wrap up in a blanket and have a day of it. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Good you got home..
Take care
Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Well done Rose. As for myself, I love driving in the snow. Every turn is a new adventure. You're right though; there are too many fools out there who shouldn't even have a license let alone be driving in a snow storm. Stay safe and warm my friend.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
...snow fell Rose...but you did not...safely...your postive thoughts led you home.
enjoyed...
John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Phew... makes ME breathe a sigh of relief, Rose, at any rate. I live in a valley with very, VERY steep hills and on two or three occasions I have nearly slithered either into a wall or over a steeply shelving edge when a sudden blizzard has blown up out of nowhere. Makes me reach for the brandy... :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Isn't it the greatest relief when you get home! I recall driving in all kinds of snow and ice back in Illinois,main reason I moved to California!Great poem Rose!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Well done dear cuz. NO one should drive a vehicle when they do not feel comfortable to be driving...whether it is because of weather, health...or just stress the cost for the mistake you could make is far too high and the cost of a taxi is pretty cheap when you think what the alternative cost could be. Glad you shared that with us Rose.
hugs

Fee

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
You are so brave Rose, I love riding in snow but I don't even attempt to drive in snow or ice. Enjoyed your poem.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
I used to love to drive in the snow it offered me a challenge but not so today. Time marches on but I stay at home and watch it pass by.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Rose, I understand your angst about driving in bad snow (damn, I sound like a therapist there, don't I?) anyhoo...keeping things in perspective, we have two little towns in Cascade Mountain Range, here in Oregon that were literally buried in with drifts of 10' and more. Makes me glad I live on the coast where the worse we get is high wind.

Keep smiling, spring is on the way.
Dan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
gosh I agree driving is crazy enough without the snow,,,I loved the good old days when there was rush hour ,,,now it seems like sooo much traffic all day long. Stay snuggled in.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Ah dear Rose, you sound so much like my husband. He is not keen to drive in this weather -- and the forecast looks like snow for the next few days. I don't mind driving in the snow at all. I always say - I got my nerves from going to Acadia in the Annapolis Valley, NS for so many years. When I was living down there in the winter, if you wanted to go out - well, you just HAD to drive. Thanks for the write and I am glad that you got home safely.

Sanja xo

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Boy, I can relate to this. People here in Texas can't drive anyway, even in dry weather; always hearing of accidents every morning on the news! What makes you think they can drive in snow or on ice?? Sheezamighty!! This is one reason why I don't drive here; too many dangfool nuts on the roads!! Excellent write, Rose; brava!

Stay safe!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
We don't get this problem anymore. But I hate it too.
And indeed, snow is very heavy, spec when trying to attach a snowmans head..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Snowy days can be truly wondrous, if we sit snug inside by the fireplace, and truly treacherous when we venture out into them. Glad you made it home.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Las time I drove from a short visit in Norway back home to Sweden, there were many eighteen wheelers, stationwagons, cars, vans and even a bus down in the ditches both sides in a 350 miles run.
When snow start to fall, heavy, stop and overnight in a motel with a warm cup of cocoa and watch reruns, that's better than freezing the jebezes out there!!!!!!!!!

Georg

Reviewed on February 7, 2008
Rose,

Shoot, you ain't seen bad drivers unless you come to Texas! They get a half inch, OMG! They're all over the road, in ditches, off bridges ... they can't drive in clear weather, what makes them think they can in inclement??? No, thank you, I'll walk!! LOL Glad you made it home. :) Excellent write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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