Just thought I'd be a bit different today no rhyming , just a thought that came to me about others that have to mend their own broken hearts for one reason or another in ways that can make them smile.
Today is For The Mending
I looked into your eyes,
There were tears,
Tears of joy & excitement,
For today you would return,
From the pain & suffering,
Of the lost love,
The broken heart,
That’s been mending.
Today your heart is filled,
With joy, love & laughter,
Today you share yourself,
With newfound love,
A special friend,
Someone you will depend on
To be there for years to come.
Someone faithful to you,
Someone who will love you,
Someone who will be trusting,
A friend for life,
Today you found your partner,
Who will walk with you,
Side by side.
Today you cry tears of joy.
We all need days of mending and someone to share them with.. A great poem.....M
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2008
Very much enjoyed this spontaneous expression of heart - how inspirational your words are for all those who are transitioning from old loss to something new.
Ahhh for Today, what a wonderful day to have and to hold. Thank you, your eloquence has my heart hopeful. Carin' Spirit
Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
Very nice write, sorry for not being around for awhile - but I was quite busy with work. I am home now, but only for a few weeks and then off again. I enjoyed this poem.
This is so uplifting, Rose. It's wonderful to be back at AD and read all the beautiful poems written by amazing poets and friends, most esp. your works. Very inspiring.
Rose, I think that you are an incurable romantic. I love it and don't change. This poem is so full of hope and happiness. One can't help but smile while reading it. Bravo. Liz
A beautiful revelation and most heartfelt. Many go through this on a daily basis and when the outcome is positive it is a joyful experience. Thanks for sharing this....
Abeautiful free flow write that flows from the heart to the screen to our eyes with the deep feelings that love and caring can provide. very well done dear Cuz and a wonderful tribute to friendships.
Rose,
We're, somewhat, on the same page, this morning. I am currently sitting here, multi-tasking, reading and reviewing poems, but also writing a poem about letting go, the pain that ensues, and finding peace in the decision.
Your poem is a wonderful tribute to friendship and romance, too.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Sanja xo
Be well,
Sheri
Be always safe,
Karen
hugs
FEe
enjoyed,,
:)Christine
Love Tinka
Micke
Great work, Rose.
For life.
Georg
Absolutely beautiful, different, but I love it! Early morning thoughts sometimes the best. :)
8 FEET of snow? HolySmokes!!!! That's a lot. Sending you gentle warmth to melt the snow -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
We're, somewhat, on the same page, this morning. I am currently sitting here, multi-tasking, reading and reviewing poems, but also writing a poem about letting go, the pain that ensues, and finding peace in the decision.
Your poem is a wonderful tribute to friendship and romance, too.
All the best and thank you,
Jill