I know we will all have to face a peration one day, that is fact and there is nothing we can do to change the way life is. However I am ready to go when the good Lord calls but I am not loking forward to one day being apart from my husband.
Just One Breath,
Just One Tear November 7, 2008
Written By: Rose Marie Rideout
There you are in my vision,
A beauty so rich and rare,
Just one breath I breathe,
Just another warm tear.
The sorrow and the heart throbs,
I feel deep within,
When I think of the past,
Where do I begin.
You’ve made a difference love,
One I’ll cherish through life.
The day I was honoured,
When I became your wife.
Now with years are slowly passing,
I see and feel the age at best.
I feel tears more often falling,
And my heart throb as I rest.
Thinking of the future,
What it may hold for us dear,
I feel one last breath I breathe,
I share just one more tear.
You hold me as you’ll never let go,
You still snuggle me at night,
Although I worry for the many tomorrows,
You whisper softly, for now it’s alright.
Very well done Rose. So very true are your words in this write. We are guaranteed but this moment; cherish each one as it could very well be our last in this life. Stay well and God bless my friend.
A beautiful loving write. Love the picture too. it is so nice to read a poem like this. It shows that their is true love out there and if we are lucky we will find it too.
hugs
Kathy
What a wonderful thought through poem Rose...Yolie and I have these same thoughts and know that life is but a breath in time and yet the Light of the Lord is waiting...
It sounds like you have a beautiful marriage, one that has endured and will endure now and always. Lovely poem and I'm sure your husband must cherish it. Hugs, Elizabeth
You are a wise woman my friend... so the basic foundation is already in your wonderful marriage...you can't know when or where or why...so..just live for the moment... There are many who will never know the love that you have experienced... and the others who have understand and know precisely what you are feeling now... hugs, lindalaw
What a lovely couple you make. These are the good old days. Enjoy em'! Your poem echoes your fear and your hope. It will happen to be, that one day will be your last day. Knowing this, your poem is an accurate personification of how little in control we are over the inevitable facts of death. It all comes down to faith, Rose, and who you put yours in during this all too brief life we have been given. Like Mary Lacy said, "Death is the end of the circle of life."
Rockie Coppolella
Leave it to that turncoat of a cuz to be so compassionate, we, the Ed brothers will be with you all the way and take care of hubby when Mac the Knife start being funny.
Beautiful and meaningful write, Rose, and I love the piccy of you adn hubby!! Very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2008
Breath taking sweet lady,and what a lovely couple you guys make....I can see how much you and your hubby love each other..just wonderful..and you sweet lady are so very beautiful heart and soul...sighhhh..Hugsss,much love too both off you
It's impressive how you balanced the emotions and beauty of love here, while maintaining the flow and form of this moving poem. I think many of us feel this way, no matter the age, with family members, friends, etc., so you will touch many hearts with this write. ~ Blessings, Michelle
From First Love to its destructive end and on to new beginnings, Mary Angela Nangini's poems explore the birth and death of a relationship. The powerful poems are presented in two parts with an introduction to her next book My Ontario Beautiful. (Th
hugs
Kathy
love and peace...
Art Sun...
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Love, Christine
Regis
This poem touches the heart and deserves a very wide readership because it speaks to all of us in its directness and truth.
John
Rockie Coppolella
Mary
A lasting, beautiful memory you pen - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Georg
Fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0