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Caught in Motion
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We were out all day on the motorcycle and thought we would relax in the hot tub with a bottle of wine tonight. The adults kids were playing card games and knew not to bother us. Yet they let the neighbour come around looking for us. Yes this is an after shot. lol.


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Caught In Motion
August15, 2009
Written by: Rose Marie Rideout

It’s late in the evening, no one’s around,
Time to relax in the hot tub with a little wine,
Hubby and wife are all alone and in the nude,
Company right now wouldn’t be the right time.

Knock, knock, I’ll get them said the daughter,
I’ll go around to see them said the friend,
Caught in motion naked in the hot tub,
Not noticing or did he just pretend.

Don’t be shy about your body said her hubby,
That’s so simple for you to say dear,
But your friend just happens to be a man,
And that friend is just standing there.

I could have slapped him silly,
For I felt the world now could see,
That there we were caught in motion,
As naked as could be.

Maybe the next time he will think,
Before he comes around to see,
Are they in the hot tub just relaxing,
or as naked as can be.

 


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 Reviews of "Caught in Motion"
Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on September 6, 2009
That's some kind of machine. Look's dangerous is it safe? lol I've never even been in one myself.
Nice poem again Rose. well done.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 22, 2009
Love this! Its happened to us a few times too... I guess we both enjoy our hot tubs!....M

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
just tell him that you were practisin your synchronised swimming moves for the Naturists Gala next month, Rose! :))... on second thoughts... better not... he might wanna join in!! This is a total inspiration, Rose... my bathtub doesn't quite allow for all the sprawl and shipment of water, sadly! And then there's the argument about who gets the taps... I think I'd just better tiptoe quietly away before I say toooooooo much! :)) Except... Man, gotta get me a motorcycle if it leads to this! :)) xxx

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
So cute! I'm bettin the neighbor was thinkin that your hubby was a lucky man to be hot-tubbin with an Angel! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
A wonderful read, Rose! I love the honesty and reality in your writing style. Very much enjoyed this one!

Anna

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
no doubt, a stark-naked situation you have liked to have avoided, but then you wouldn't have have written such a cute poem ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
I just love the fact that you can write such light hearted poetry about such passionate subjects and make it so pure and adorable..You go girl, I wish I was in a hot tub with a sweetie too!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
My simple wish would be...Please, somebody, come bother me!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on August 16, 2009
very cute write sis, love it, would love to have a hot tub too. and this write is so us isn't it. LOL

Love you much sis
Selena

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
..don't you hate when motions like this get disturbed??...so funny Rose..though you might think NOT ...cute write!
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Naked wearing a black bikini? you Canadians are a very strange people, come south and we will teach you a few things about skinny dipping! LOL

Georg


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Well, isn't this the "naked" truth coming out, but I think there may be a lot more next times that he drops in unexpectedly lol

Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Rose, this is wonderful!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Oh goodness, but at least you were having fun and that counts more...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Lord can we ever get privacy.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
wow, Rose you are brave!;-) If hubby doesn't mind you must have been covered by the water ;-)Great pic and tub!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
If hubby doesn't mind I'd take that as a compliment yet I know what you were feeling at that moment. Thanks for sharing this moment in your life. Hope you enjoyed the fun and time while it lasted. LadyJ

Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Well, now, Rosie~ Lookat ya! LOL Havin' a little fun, ain't we?? LOL GREAT write; I LOVE it (and that piccy)! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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