deeply sensative write.

cheers and peace,
dan

I understand your emotions in this poem, Rose. Life can be such a struggle, and seeing the person you love affected by the negativity that surrounds us at times is a difficult cross to bear. Well penned, my friend.

Anna

Loving thy neighbor is one of the cornerstones of God's thoughts, a good man will shed a tear for their misfortune.

Georg

tears flowing from the corner of your eye reflect the essence of their reason ... deeply moving emotions ...

this is filled with doubt as well as need-i enjoyed it!

True love is a treasure, Rose. You express it very effectively. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Rose,
The feelings are real and the passion gentle but intense, too.

John

Sometimes we can believe we know all there is to know about someone but still, there are private places we all keep hidden away...great write with a lot of true emotion and feelings.
hugs Cuz
fee

This is deep, Rose. Well done.

Deep and a bit poignant. Your passion for your man is very evident. Liz

Part of life is living with the hard and with the soft. Not knowing if "Thorough The Corner of my Eye" is true or the basis for a poem, as one that was married for fifty years, I learned, and the woman I now plan on spending the balance of my life with is the recipient of the thinking I now have, simply put, "it's not worth it!" I will never again argue! Right or wrong is usually a matter of opinion and, to me now, it simply is not worth it so I'll just shut up and let the heat pass. Later, when the heat is gone, the one that is right or the one that is wrong will usually admit their error.
Good poem, though, even though it brings back unpleasant memories.

Who's the man....who's the man behind the man? or woman behind the man? it's hard to tell, but I know that person is a Harley fan!! I see their shirt logo :)

and ahhhh...let the hugs begin my dear den sister, as they heal all those fears & wounds. They just get absorbed into each other & we are cleansed...beautiful tenderness escapes from the corner of my eye too...very emotional
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Is this photo your hubbie?

Rose...Rose..such a blossom in your writing. I do believe you're getting even better.
Steve.

I hope all is well with you and Fred, ROse; you are both in my prayers! Such a sad write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(