The Peacefulness of the Water
January 23, 2010
Written by: Rose Marie Rideout
What is it I notice as I look at the peacefulness
While I rest on the warf near the sea,
I feel the silence and the strength of the waters,
As it softly whispers and beckons to me.
The waves are the music and the spray are like tears,
Begging for admiration for it’s sight.
As we gaze at the waters enjoying it’s beauty,
Taking in it’s peacefulness in the early night.
The water savors beauty and contentment,
Shares more love then one can hold.
As one listens to the gentle whispers
Through the peacefulness for the young and old.
Quiet as the dream of a love,
That will last a lifetime to each,
The love that flows for evermore,
A dream, so close yet still out of reach.
Hush my darling, look at the peacefulness,
As we snuggle together near the sea,
Feel the silence and the strength of the waters,
In dreams delivering love that will always be.
Truly beautiful and uplifting, a soothe for the soul...and I totally agree with what Michelle said about the photo.
John
Your friend from Southern California; Mark
Love this Rose, one of your very best.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
and the embrace of devotion is beautiful
Love & Blessings
Vickie
What amazes me about this poem is how you have brought the tranquillity to at least one person I know in your reviews who has never seen the sea.
Well done.
Anna
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Georg
to accompany this excellent write
Love & Peace be with you
William
Regis
Excellent write and beautiful picture, where is that? I wanna go.
Warmth and Love to you, Carin'
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