- The city where I was born, that so many try hard to dismember -
(October 2007}
Swimming against the current - currently/temporarily - I lost my memory and my colors faded - far from home - to an unknown shade of gray.
Fighting in silence, I saw sweet pink flesh, a flush of red hair and she called me back to my land.
I heard the sound of the notes she played on her floating piano and I recalled old copper lamps while facing huge LED screens that made my head spin.
Still, I kept swimming.
Recovering my memory was not a simple game, not a pleasant rush of adrenaline in the ancient blood inherited from my imperial city.
Now I swing against the current, until I see the bridge, its shining steel cables engineered for generations to last and move, at last, crossing cold, clouded waters over crying continents.
The strongest structure looks, from afar, light as a dragonfly and the bridge slowly disappears like delicate, diaphanous wings torn by those who want to divide and rule.
Yet, I hold on to my gravity-anchored, suspension bridge, until the day I let go and get carried by the stream (of collective unconscious-ness?)
To stand against destruction, here are my memories... made of views, tastes, music, dreams and unifying love.
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Reviews of "Divide Et Impera - Waves of memories of Istanbul."
Axilea, your metaphor is quite enchanting. Rich in verbiage that stirs imagination, links the present to the past and ponders of tomorrows events. The bridge, across the Bosphorus your symbolic link of past to present. You capture the struggle to clearly recall those times now long past in the city of your heritage, your birth. It is a chant that murmurs in my ear and painting beautiful pictures of family, love and legacy. A city that unites two continents and myriad cultures. A city of contrasts so vivid, new to ancient. Yet artfully blends east and west. I bid you love and peace my friend. Jon Michael
With admiration
... your poetry moves and embellishes all who read. Your emotion lies deep within and beyond Istanbul ... truly a universal poem when it comes to ones heat and soul ......
"Divide Et Impera - Waves of memories of Istanbul" is historic painting bearing a great message in its closing lines,
"To stand against destruction,
here are my memories...
made of views,
tastes, music, dreams
and unifying love."
*********************** where art and wisdom meet and glow.
Your profound description of a once beautiful place, your home, makes my heart ache for you......
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Paul Shakespeare (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Great poem!
I would like to hear more of your own personal stories about Istanbul (I had heard it was an exciting and exotic place!). I almost had the chance go there on a tour; but 9/11 happened and I was restricted to base at Incirlik.
Do tell me more... <smile>
Axilea,
As a former Daughter of Istanbul, you made me cry with these lines...
....Yet, I hold on
to my gravity-anchored,
suspension bridge,
until the day I let go
and get carried by the stream
(of collective unconscious-ness?).....
Your poem is not only full of imagery, it touches so many levels - conscious, unconscious, past and future. Given I lived 2 years in Istanbul (Etiler) , I can associate to ripping tidal currents, the lofty
concrete suspension bridges and the diachronism between absolute elegance et the uncivilized brutal.
Heritage. This reminds me in a way of Mdm Curie and how she felt about her homeland. Come to think about it, Axilea, all of your poems really are focused on standing against destruction -- never really noticed that before. I love the stream of "unconscious-ness" and your play on the word "current" --Charlie
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... your poetry moves and embellishes all who read. Your emotion lies deep within and beyond Istanbul ... truly a universal poem when it comes to ones heat and soul ......
.jeanne.
"Divide Et Impera - Waves of memories of Istanbul" is historic painting bearing a great message in its closing lines,
"To stand against destruction,
here are my memories...
made of views,
tastes, music, dreams
and unifying love."
*********************** where art and wisdom meet and glow.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Be safe,
Karen
I would like to hear more of your own personal stories about Istanbul (I had heard it was an exciting and exotic place!). I almost had the chance go there on a tour; but 9/11 happened and I was restricted to base at Incirlik.
Do tell me more... <smile>
All the best;
Roger
As a former Daughter of Istanbul, you made me cry with these lines...
....Yet, I hold on
to my gravity-anchored,
suspension bridge,
until the day I let go
and get carried by the stream
(of collective unconscious-ness?).....
Fee
concrete suspension bridges and the diachronism between absolute elegance et the uncivilized brutal.
Susan
I love the imagery, I love the brilliance of your mind. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.