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Divide Et Impera - Waves of memories of Istanbul.
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- The city where I was born, that so many try hard to dismember -
(October 2007}


Poem Artwork

Swimming
against the current
- currently/temporarily -
I lost my memory
and my colors faded
- far from home -
to an unknown shade of gray.

Fighting in silence,
I saw sweet pink flesh,
a flush of red hair
and she called me back
to my land.

I heard the sound
of the notes she played
on her floating piano
and I recalled
old copper lamps
while facing
huge LED screens
that made my head spin.

Still, I kept swimming.

Recovering my memory
was not a simple game,
not a pleasant rush
of adrenaline
in the ancient blood
inherited from my imperial city.

Now I swing against the current,
until I see the bridge,
its shining steel cables
engineered for generations
to last and move, at last,
crossing cold, clouded waters
over crying continents.

The strongest structure
looks, from afar,
light as a dragonfly
and the bridge slowly disappears
like delicate, diaphanous wings
torn by those who want
to divide and rule.

Yet, I hold on
to my gravity-anchored,
suspension bridge,
until the day I let go
and get carried by the stream
(of collective unconscious-ness?)

To stand against destruction,
here are my memories...
made of views,
tastes, music, dreams
and unifying love.


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Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 11, 2011
Axilea, your metaphor is quite enchanting. Rich in verbiage that stirs imagination, links the present to the past and ponders of tomorrows events. The bridge, across the Bosphorus your symbolic link of past to present. You capture the struggle to clearly recall those times now long past in the city of your heritage, your birth. It is a chant that murmurs in my ear and painting beautiful pictures of family, love and legacy. A city that unites two continents and myriad cultures. A city of contrasts so vivid, new to ancient. Yet artfully blends east and west. I bid you love and peace my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by jeanne watson
Reviewed on November 17, 2007
With admiration
... your poetry moves and embellishes all who read. Your emotion lies deep within and beyond Istanbul ... truly a universal poem when it comes to ones heat and soul ......

.jeanne.

Reviewed on November 11, 2007

"Divide Et Impera - Waves of memories of Istanbul" is historic painting bearing a great message in its closing lines,

"To stand against destruction,
here are my memories...
made of views,
tastes, music, dreams
and unifying love."
*********************** where art and wisdom meet and glow.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
There is so much imagery in this beautifully written piece. Your metaphors are outstanding.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Your profound description of a once beautiful place, your home, makes my heart ache for you......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Paul Shakespeare (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Great poem!
I would like to hear more of your own personal stories about Istanbul (I had heard it was an exciting and exotic place!). I almost had the chance go there on a tour; but 9/11 happened and I was restricted to base at Incirlik.
Do tell me more... <smile>

All the best;
Roger

Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Axilea,
As a former Daughter of Istanbul, you made me cry with these lines...


....Yet, I hold on
to my gravity-anchored,
suspension bridge,
until the day I let go
and get carried by the stream
(of collective unconscious-ness?).....

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
STrong and beautiful put by a poetess of note.

Fee

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on November 9, 2007
Your poem is not only full of imagery, it touches so many levels - conscious, unconscious, past and future. Given I lived 2 years in Istanbul (Etiler) , I can associate to ripping tidal currents, the lofty
concrete suspension bridges and the diachronism between absolute elegance et the uncivilized brutal.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Heritage. This reminds me in a way of Mdm Curie and how she felt about her homeland. Come to think about it, Axilea, all of your poems really are focused on standing against destruction -- never really noticed that before. I love the stream of "unconscious-ness" and your play on the word "current" --Charlie

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 8, 2007
In your dreams the bridge anchors you from one land to your homeland. It is the love of one heart divided into two parts.
Susan

Reviewed on November 8, 2007
Axilea,

I love the imagery, I love the brilliance of your mind. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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