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written on the birch bark
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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Content with his ignorance,
he smiles, noticing no difference
in his ravaged mirror,
between the illusion of elegance
and the reality with a touch of the ridicule.

If later that mirror was surrounded by
unexpected nature, small branches with thorns,
fresh green that looks for sunshine,
the irruption of leaves, leaflets and pods…
and if later he was surrounded by the truth…
/
There are cavities where lies fall,
alibis where his life disappears,
sudden responsibilities to cover up
past travels to the land of void
/
If later the embrace of the honey locust
produced affection with a twist,
affliction and mist to lure
lifelong mechanisms, the lucidity
wouldn’t last, it’s all written on the birch bark:
predictable surface kissed by ignorance.

Then, her body is an affordable amphora
for him – asking her little at a time –
he safeguards the illusion of control
inducing, seducing, pretending not to
want anything to keep some vow
of chastity, poverty and self-obedience;
a monk, deep in the forest of a hall mirror.

And when he’s gone, she mourns the loss of nothing.

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "written on the birch bark"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 30, 2011
the shallowness of such pretense is best summed up by your classy image of "travels to the land of void". Relations with those who choose to live there is like being in perpetual motion and getting no where; the journeying itself is exhausting: a forest trail which is permanently overgrown and self-defeating. Very cool writing! xx

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
This is fantastic. But such a waste for her to have endured so long. Patrick

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
Brilliant poetry. So much thought and talent are invested in
these lines. Notably:

between the illusion of elegance
and the reality with a touch of the ridicule.

and these concluding lines:

a monk, deep in the forest of a hall mirror.

And when he’s gone, she mourns the loss of nothing.

My admiration and my envy, Axilea.

-gene.





Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
There is much to gather from your lovely verses, Axilea. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
some of the finest poetry i've read in quite some time. this is a keeper. excellent, i'm really in awe!!

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
I see someone who has created his own little dream world but woa to him when he awakens.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
This is a masterpiece! :)
At each stage of a relationship we have ample opportunity to use the relationship as a mirror, or rather what i am trying to say is we can ask ourselves are we self absorbed, or are we capable of putting the needs of the other first when necessary. I'm not sure if I have this right, Axilea, but at any rate, I am so in awe of your eloquence!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
The acid is mild and sophisticated but penetrating, Axilea,
for the overwhelming emotion, for me, is the sadness of
misunderstanding, in such a relationship an ignorance of loss
or not knowing what treasure we have..
and better off without him...quite rightly.

John

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 29, 2011
Potent and deep as a witches spell...this poem draws in not only the mind but the heart and soul as well,beautiful Axiliea
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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2011
Axilea, I Love Your Writings and this one as well!
Always,
Deborah


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