As an untrained poet, I sense an ordained form to this poem; unfortunately, I cannot identify it. However, I can still enjoy and appreciate the skill of your writing.
Seems like a long time since I've seen your name here, so I'm glad you're back and hope you are well.
I borrow a word from your first stanza--the poem is enchanting!
Beautiful, Richard! Filled with romanticism and deep meaning. Your poetic ability has really grown and I think seeing a couple of poems turned to music has been a great inspiration for you. Keep them coming, Richard. You truly do a nice job with all your poems.
I am on my knees when I recieved your notification for this poem!
(shame on you...I am in my garden feeling the earth & planting tomatoes)
You know I love your poetry recitations & this one is especially lovely Dear Richard. You have been blessed in life & so has your lovely wife to have been swept up by you & your "Prisoner of the Heart" I admire you so much...
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Always,
Deborah
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Seems like a long time since I've seen your name here, so I'm glad you're back and hope you are well.
I borrow a word from your first stanza--the poem is enchanting!
Connie
This poem touches my heart. I agree with Victoria, you are blessed.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
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(shame on you...I am in my garden feeling the earth & planting tomatoes)
You know I love your poetry recitations & this one is especially lovely Dear Richard. You have been blessed in life & so has your lovely wife to have been swept up by you & your "Prisoner of the Heart" I admire you so much...
Love Always, Vickie