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Daniel Hogan's Reflection
by Patrick Talty → (All Poetry by Patrick Talty)
  
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A perspective on the old adage: "Be Prepared".


Poem Artwork

Daniel Hogan in waiting room
in waiting mode, feeling
like a caged bird waiting
to be released into boundless air
to exchange cheap bird food
for fat worms and other kinds
of delicacies
not on past menus.

Glass door nearby; reflection
stares at, speaks to him:
"Why look so smug? It will be tough
tough to get this job:
assistant to stern, suited man
with toe-cutter reputation!”

Daniel joins reflection
eye-to-eye, chin angled for battle,
hands clasped as though relaxing
in a bowl of Radox,
radiating confidence.

“Don’t give a stuff! I can handle
toe-cutters, head-choppers, executioners;
I know what they’ll ask;
I know what I’ll answer;
I'm prepared!” Reflection whispers,
‘What will they ask? What will you answer?’

“They will ask what I know,
what I know about driving
Distance Education programs.
I’ll produce an answer
they can’t and won’t refuse."

*Yesterday I walked, talked,
took notes from, listening
listening, as eagerly
as I might listen
to the sound of bellbirds
in a forest glen
To a generous DE expert
at another uni;. in one day
I heard enough, saw enough,
acquired enough and learnt enough
to occupy enough of my mind
to satisfy your question.*

“Next they will observe
the bulkiness, sheer length
of CV, making it look
like a Tolstoy manuscript
of War and Peace.
‘What would you think’ they’ll ask
‘of a CV greater in bulk
than the *Quo Vadis?* script?’
I’ll be ready, yes, I'll be ready":

*Such a person would carry
one of two bags with labels;
one labelled ‘bearer unstable’,
the other, 'I’m a seeker
of personal growth through experience’;
and ladies, gentlemen, I tell you truly
I have always carried the second bag!*

“There will be more questions, but none
as important as my two predictions;
no answer more crucial than those
carefully, thoughtfully anticipated.”

Friendly voice breaks dialogue,
“Daniel Hogan? Daniel Hogan?”
You may go in now.” He rises,
winks, reflection winks back,
confident, easy does it, Daniel!
.

Daniel, on leaving, looks at reflection,
reflection on leaving looks at Daniel;
Daniel whispers, “I got the job!”
reflection grins
a *good upon you* grin,
they dive
into oblivious crowds.

Afterword:

There’s a moral to this poem
for those of you who cared
to read it all from GO to WHOA
and that is: *Be Prepared*!


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 Reviews of "Daniel Hogan's Reflection"
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2003
Very well expressed,with a lovely spool of thread running through this, those that dont get the message cant read... well done, i got a great buzz from reading this, take care...Mark ...

Reviewed on May 25, 2003
Hi Patrick:

I'm so glad to have read this story of a poem. This was so well-written and carried a well-meaning message.

It's so great to write what you write, for you can always inspire me to try new ways into improving my writings...and this is one of them.

A poem that carries a story and a well-meaning message is worth so much more!

I'm really inspired now! Thank you!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
Wowwwwww..very entertaining..

Peace, Dove

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
I am now prepared to say this, without reservation: My dear Patrick, I do believe you could make reading the dictionary a unique experience! (smile). You have written drama, wisdom and humor into a place we all recognize so well.. and we all happily invite, swallow, even, your moral as a truth already enunciated fully by our parents. I say again, Patrick, your wizardry knows no fences or bounds. You, sir, are simply a treat! I go with a grin. katy.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on May 23, 2003
ha ha ha ha ha...and a big wink at ya...it's a beauty Patrick ...from go to whoa.

Loved it!

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2003
A perfectly expressed piece Patrick. Words all needed and concept well thought-through. I found myself nodding in agreement and amused by how typical this portrayal really is... excellent. thanks.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Good read I am in awe

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
I agree, very entertaining and well written

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
Sage advice...and an interesting way of putting it!

Reviewed by Lee Garrett
Reviewed on July 9, 2002
So true a moral yet have I never seen.
It puts me in mind of a truth of mine
that dreams need feet more than
the dreamers that spawn
the dream--
If you know what I mean.

Reviewed by Lee Garrett
Reviewed on November 5, 2001
heavy metal chains clinking toe clippers! i like Daniel Hogan's Reflection.

Reviewed by Victoria Murray
Reviewed on October 27, 2001
An entertaining read-- nicely said...
Victoria


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