Bill, I find your poetry to be inspiring & well written...this poem is touching and allows us to imagine just how fragile youth can be. An exceptional writing.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Incredible poem.
God bless you. Kathy
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Susan