I Gotta Have It (Bad Habit) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2004

This is GREAT! :-)

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on November 21, 2004

I liked the play on words..."smoke me like a cigarette". Wonderful!!! ;) Silver

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 17, 2004

Wonderful metaphor. I smoke your poems everyday, karla and got addictd to your creativity and talent.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Unexpected and wonderful write! Girl you surprise me sometimes :-) this is a good thing :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

A girl is gotta do what a girl is gotta do and dream like I do!!

Very well penned Karla!!

Is the grapes on the picture or is my eyes deceiving me?

Love thi picture may I steal it????

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

excellent metaphor and imagery ... if he's smart he'll get addicted quick!

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

I don't know where this came from, but lady, you DO have a way with words!!! This is great!!!

~Rose~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

I would like to give you whatever it is you want, but I think that Rene' might have something to say about it, and I like my teeth, the few that are left, right where they are, sooo much easier to chew! LOL, ED

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

fantastic write!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

This is a fantastic write, Karla. Your images are solid and your direction strong. This is excellent work. I really love the feel of this.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Ohmygod.. I like bad habits!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

This is a great write, Karla. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Still Waters (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Such a well penned poem on ones inner will wanting to be released. You said it with fire

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Wow, that is quite the picture you paint. Excellent. Trish.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

You sound a lot like my neice after she discovered she was being dumped around this time of year. I keep telling her that the man is out there. I had the same problems and finally I did find the one right for me. We have been married twenty-five years. I think I just got the inspiration for a new poem.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Karla,
You're on fire. You might melt the den. Very good write. Hope you get what you're after. (lol)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Karla,

Imaged to perfection - this one is deep, very deep . . . poetic excellence, my friend!!

Robert

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Wooo girl wherever that came from dig a little deeper and pull out a few more!!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

(((Karla)))
Love this poem, keep writing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

(((Karla)))

Now that is one bad habit you have! *grins*

Fun write; quite different, but quite enjoyable! Outstanding poem; you are really soarin' with your muse! Keep it up; you're doing GREAT! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

oo la la Karla! This is fantastic! I love your metaphor
yoU'll have everyone wanting to use it;-)Great poem!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

lol
saving this!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on November 16, 2004

Sizzling and passionate Karla...
You are setting the Den ablaze tonight...grin
Love
Peter