A Siren's Song (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Hilding Lindquist (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

Its sensuality pulls me through and the words flowed smoothly in sync with the theme ... well done!

Gus
Hilding "Gus" lindquist

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

a tasteful bit of erotica - well done

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

I guess you are feeling a bit...ummmmm! Quite a poem, and a most captivating graphic, Karla.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

well done

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on July 21, 2005

Nicely done.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Damn women, all alike, all that got on their minds is that little three letter word...Ed

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Absolutely georgous and oh so naughty...just love it girl, way to go!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

hehehehehe...methinks I know what is on your mind, Lady Buckeye...something to do with pollenation, right?...hehehehehee. All kidding aside, this is very good...delightfully sensual and the pic is perfect...not at all offensive.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

I think there's something in the water, that all the ladies in the den have drunk today.

Very hot write. Even Zues missed the boat.. Musta been playing with his Venus..

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

sensual like hot summer breezes - what are you thinking about? LOL

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

This is absolutely gorgeous! You created strong images and emotions. Very nicely done!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Well, My goodness Karla! What a poem this is. I love the words, setting and visuals!

Reviewed by Michael Ault

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

My...being an ex-sailor it speaks to me...

Mike

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Dear Karla,

hehehehe now I understand ... mmmmmmm sensual softness :)

Must be something in the air lol.

This is absolutely stunning, very passionate oozing with sensuality.

warm hugs
Elga
p.s. Thanks for the word of caution, ...ooooo the vision of you gracefully "gliding" across the bed, enough to make me laugh without the satin sheets... :-D "wicked" lol.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Whoa, its getting hot in here! Karla!!!! Darn, I never knew you could erotica like this! This is so sensual and sizzling hot! i doubt if the a/c will be enough for me ... whoa!!!

God bless, girl!!

Sandie.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Ahhhh, written in true siren form. Very seductive Karla. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Wow, erotic, hot, a very beautiful one
thanks for sharing
love and peace
Huda

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Wow must be the heat of summer so many beautiful passionate and erotic writes like this one on here, my head is spinning with lust and your words just kicked it up another notch. Well written Karla.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

woo hoo we have a new sex kitten in the den, and boy can she write!
Watch out guys Karla's ready to roar!;-) Way to go poet! Show em your stuff!

Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Oh boy I see the sea got to you too....lol!!

Pretty amazing Karla!!

Naughty girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

(((Karla)))

Whoa, baby, you melted my monitor (not to mention, my GLASSES!)~ LOL

GODAMIGHTY, what a hot, HOT write; me thinks you need another cruise so you can cool off! Outstanding, erotic write; brava! You raised the bar on this one!! *CLAPPING*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *WHEW!*

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Karla,

Ahem...I had to cover my own ears while I was reading this. Feeling a mite Randy are we? Nicely done.

Peace and (((Hugs)))

B (for blushing)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

Haha! You're feeling a bit. . . . ummmmm, huh? Well I do belive that your projected that ummmmm feeling quite well within the construction of the poem.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 20, 2005

sexy and pretty at the same time, you did this very well, and i know the feeling