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Stalked (A Tricouplet)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Inspired by Jerry Bolton's creative genius.


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STALKED (A Tricouplet) *
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embers announce a newborn as
fire begat fire:
on white-hot sheets of flame, a beast
with yellow eyes
twists on its umbilical cord
in strengthening winds.

it learns to graze;
the fields, ablaze.

the monster's breath sears the sun
which turns blood-red;
smoke chugs from its nostrils; i taste
its presence
bitter on my tongue, sharp like glass
deep in my lungs,

igniting fear
as it draws near.

this is MY disaster, the
ongoing drought,
because i prayed the rain away.
it's my fault.
the devil parting burning grass
searches for me

as its next snack ...
must watch my back.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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*  Hey, I only get one hour on the computer; besides, I ran out of words.  Thanks, Jerry, for the inspiration!  Hope I did it proud.  :)


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 Reviews of "Stalked (A Tricouplet)"
Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on January 19, 2006
Fantastic write! Safi

Reviewed on January 17, 2006
Excellent write as always Karla
GOd Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on January 17, 2006
Karla:

one word, BRAVA!!

:)

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Well done, Karla! Takes like a match to a light ... torched this one, baby! Sending some rain your way. Get out your rain barrel and catch it to wash your hair!

Sage

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Fabulous write Karla!
Love and peace to you

Carole

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You have captured the rage and terror of fire in this beautiful poem, Karla. I saw clouds crossing over Texas on the radar today and I wondered if any rain had fallen. I am guessing no, by what you have written here. We were supposed to get snow and rain from the clouds today but Yansa, the Goddess of wind, inhaled the clouds and blew them on toward Texas.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Stunning work Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You did super well, this is an inspired work and one to be very proud of, well done.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Stunning piece Karla, your pen done Jerry proud girl.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
I think this is truly one of your best, Karla! So spot-on atmospheric it summons all the appropriate emotions into a vivid fury... reminds me of the nightmares I had when I was sick with a perpetual high fever, such that I had the rigours; there was always someone out to get me and was burning me to the ground! Hellish or what?? Excellent diction and form... irrespective of time and word pressures! :)) TY Kate xx AND for all your love and prayers for my Mum... she is hangin in there! xx

Reviewed by Dee C.
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Awesome job!!!
D:)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
I got ya, I like it, very much. Thanks for trying it out, even if it is a short. I know a lot of folks don't like long poems, but I do. thanks again. Will send you something in the morning.

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
An amazing pen Karla.

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Great Karla, you are amazing,
(((Hugs))) Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You did more then make it proud you brought it to life! Fantastic write. I could feel the heat. It's not your fault; nature does as nature pleases.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
I think you did Jerry's form proud, Karla.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
Karla with this write you have just proved beyond a doubt , your worth as a poet. I hope you will remember this one every time you begin to doubt yourself. Hang it on your fridge! Dynamic poetry with vibrant visuals that stoke the imagination. I like the tricouplet, fantastic!

Eileen

Reviewed on January 16, 2006
This was your own words as nobody else can write as you. We all are dierent but what matters is that you are writing and it is going all around the world no matter what you write is a blessing for all us to read. God Bless.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2006
You did it fantastic.....
x0x0x0x
Your friend......Ron


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