Tanka Six: Undressing (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Have my tankas had a bad (good) influence on you or have your tankas had a bad (good) influence on me? :)

Reviewed by L� Anita

Reviewed on February 20, 2008

Very Sexy Girl.... Loved it!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

Delightfully sensual........M

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Karla--now that is the way to unwrap a gift.
Lovely present.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Is it Fee's Birthday? That man needs a three alarm cake like his passion.

I admire your pen here Karla. Thia one is a little spicey, I mean to tell ya!
blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Yahoooola mama! Nice work, Karla! Our sweet Fee ought to feel pretty special by now.. lol
Becca~

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Nice and spicy...love it!
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Sweet, sweet sentiments, Karla. Short yet powerfully suggestive. I love it. Merci, mon amie. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Sheish! Karla - this is most sensual. What was the weather like while this was happening? LOL I'll bet Fee will truly enjoy this one. He's quite a fellow.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Wow! is it me, or is it getting warm in here? You done this up right for Fee's Birthday greeting, Karla!! Good one :o)

Micke

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Wow this is great Karla and I am sure Fee will appreciate it. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

A wonderful piece to pen for our friend. Lady J

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

You rockin the weather and the readers now;-) WTG
fine birthday gift for Fee!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Splendid offering!!

Happy Birthday Felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Que romantico!

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

...the moons cheeks...are blushed...by the color of this pen.
you got it goin' on this time Karla...
John

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

But...not a G rated poem... my eyes are burning!
hee, hee..
cryssa

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

G-R-E-A-T writing...loved the sensuous style of this. Short but powerful!!!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Love it, love it, love it, Karla!!! Unbridled passion!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

I saw a cow jump over the moon, and while she was up there
that dirty dish ran off with some flirty spoon...

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Wow, the passion! --Charlie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Wow, Karla! Sensuous write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Wow hot and sensual and yes this is what I said the other day...just another example of the wide range of talent you have available. Thank you so much for the birthday wishes as well.
hugs
Fee whoooooo wooo hot in here

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

I am with Mr Ed WOW
lol

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Be still my heart! Rebecca

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Karla, gotta love that picture, it seems to be saying "Was it good for you, it was good for me?"

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Switch off the light please...I am so shy!!!!
And please, be gentle...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

WOW!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Well, now, Karla!~ Feelin' a bit...mmm, shall we say "Frisky"??? MEOW!! LOL Excellently penned and illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

How romantic of a storm. Beautifully written. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 18, 2008

wow--steamy