Outbreak (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 19, 2011

It must have been terrifying, you describe it almost too well!

Reviewed on April 18, 2011

The world wide catastrophes do seem to be increasing...scary and you captured the utter helplessness in this write Karla...
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Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 18, 2011

I worry about you guys out there:) Great voice in this poem, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 17, 2011

Karla, we recognize our vulnerability and the potential perils we face when mother nature rages. We become aware of just how small and insignificant we are in relation to powerful, massive storms. Free to roam at will anywhere and time they choose. Stay safe and well my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on April 17, 2011

KARLA - well put!

MAN and his Greed and Foolishness have been like Splinters, festering in Mother Nature's skin ... Eventually the Poison and Puss Must Erupt - and with a FURY!

Air, Land, Sea, Food Pollution - Chemicals, CO2 Emissions, Atomic Bomb Blasts and Tests - Wars - Pestilence ... We have brought it on Ourselves!

As God and Mother Nature work together to bring about a CLEANSING and a RESTORATION - Man Must Suffer the Consequences - Life, Limb, and Chattels Will Be LOST ...

Tom.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 17, 2011

we sure are helpless to the power of nature when she barrels down in our direction ... keep safe, Karla ....

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 17, 2011

you have portrayed well the fear, and desolation - good writing

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 17, 2011

Great title for this great write, Karla. It seems things are getting crazier all over the world. Well done, my friend. Keep safe and may God bless.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 16, 2011

"Lord, keep us safe". Indeed! Power in your words; hard hitting write of what storm chasers must endure trying to keep ahead of the storm and warning people to stay safe ... well done, Karla; brava! And the picture is fantastic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 16, 2011

Powerful write here Karla thank you for sharing!!!
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on April 16, 2011

Very well written- it is raining very heavy where I am now...one moment at a time.

John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 16, 2011

I'd crawl under my camper, but doubt that would do much...should do what Jerry says...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 16, 2011

We need to bring back storm cellars.