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Time To Rethink Your Problems
by Marie Bradley → (All Poetry by Marie Bradley)
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As human beings, we're so focused on our own problems that we sometimes forget to take notice of the massive problems others are having. This little poem is to draw people's attention to the fact that no matter how bad their problems may seem, when compared to the problems of others, they may very well need to feel gratitude for what they do have.

So Your Life is a Real Mess?

Your life is hard, you’re feeling down and no one seems to care
You’re overwhelmed by all your bills; it just seems so unfair.
The one you love with all your heart has suddenly turned cold
And left you for another, oh such heartaches to unfold.
The friend you trusted most in life betrayed you recently
Why can’t your life go smooth for once and roll out decently?
And just when you’ve revved your pity party completely to full gear
The evening news comes on full blast, as if meant for you to hear
Tornadoes hit the Southwest with such vengeance, power and speed
There was no time for inhabitants to pack their bags and leave
In the matter of a heartbeat homes demolished, lives destroyed
All the creature comforts gone that these poor families once enjoyed
Another broadcast sadly tells of young children in their schools
Where a madman opens fire on them, like breaking all the rules
Confusion, chaos, terror and the worst of this ordeal
Is the tragic loss of innocent lives, what parents had to feel
You hear another tragedy, a young man was shot dead
The policeman thought he saw a gun not a cellphone instead
A family gripped by grief and pain and anger all in one
Will never again hug or see their only precious son
So when you’re feeling down and out like life’s too much too take
Compare your woes with others and please do not mistake
That If worries were your laundry
And you hung them up to dry
Along with all the others that the news
Made catch your eye
You would probably take your own back
And rethink your current strife
You have your home, your kids your friends and most of all your life.

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 Reviews of "Time To Rethink Your Problems"
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 30, 2013
quite well written
budd

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 29, 2013
Yes, full of emotion and the truth. But your perspective is what I like the most. I'm with you that life is generally good and we have to accept the bad as the exception, not the rule.

Modern communication and the Internet causes all seven billion of us to be in the spotlight whenever there is something going on in our world. For those that fear all that can happen to them, the media magnifies it. All in all, in spite of all the drama in my life, it has been quite calm and peaceful, with many good friends, acquaintances, and helpful strangers.

Like you have written… Embrace life, it's all we have.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 28, 2013
Wow! Lots of drama and emotions wrapped up in this poetic tale. Yes, it makes our trivial problems seem so insignificant. Well done Marie!

John Michael


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