Begin again
to weave the labyrinth,
spun a hundred-thousand times and more,
season to season,
begun in the dark-bound ice
of midwinter’s turning.
But instead
of quiet blindness
and the endless trudging of false pride,
Begin inside,
Reach down the murky, muddled swells
Of dreams and memories and questions.
Take nothing but curiosity
in search of more
than ideals that quickly rust in rain
like shattered swords.
Begin again
To weave the labyrinth,
Gather together
the tatters of broken darkness.
When the sparking flame
Of midwinter’s depth returns,
illuminate the rhythm of daydreams,
Show all realities that lie inside.
Then pace from uncertainty into sureness,
Reach upward, unfurl the dance
Woven into the highland meadow
for another hundred-thousand times and more…
Grasp hold…
Do not let go…
of that elusive thread called peace.
"Elusive Thread" first appeared in "Faces of the Goddess" Issue 36.
Yes, we have to always strive for peace and hope that one day we will begin again for the last time. I see the images of the starting over again and again in "begun in the dark-bound ice of midwinters turning", and "the tatters of broken darkness. When the sparking flame ... returns." I see these lines offering hope that maybe peace will arrive if "we" do not give up striving for it.
Hi Kathleen, I read your poem, "Elusive Thread". I found it mysterious and thought provoking. Yes Peace must be something we must strive to achieve so as it contains a win win situation for all parties. Great work. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den".
Your poem was very thought grabbing to me. I sensed a creepily delicious flow in your poem and as a writer in a style of lovecraft, I enjoyed this very much. Good wording, good work.
"...ideals that quickly rust in rain
like shattered swords."....
Huh.. what a metaphor! Peace has woven our civilizations. If peace is dead, civilization is just a shroud.
A great work Kath
"Elusive thread called peace." Excellent, well written, very much to the point that love, happiness and peace are found within us: never without. Visit me sometime, Kathleen.
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Kathleen I quite enjoyed reading "Elusive Thread"
A touching write indeed.
All the best,
Gwendolyn
Beautifully said, highly professional. Gene.
Charles
like shattered swords."....
Huh.. what a metaphor! Peace has woven our civilizations. If peace is dead, civilization is just a shroud.
A great work Kath
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What a wonderful well penned piece, am looking forward to reading more!
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