Tell Me Why? (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 1, 2008

Feelings well up with such doubt!
Great intense sad write Viv! I can feel the deadened pain in your heart reaching out! I hope for happiness to fill it, it's his LOSS!
As your heart is reaching - I am betting you will soon be receiving!As you allow for such warm healing to start it's well deserved mending! Love will again be in your heart to stay, as time has it's special unique way!

Write On!
LOVE and Hugs, Warrior Purple Passion Gypsy Lady Sheexoooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on June 29, 2008

Somethings can not be answered and we'll never know. We always wonder and some things we never get over. Wonderful write.

Ed

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 29, 2008

Hi Amber,I'm deeply sorry for your lost.Love can be so complicated sometimes.Just when you think you meet someone that will change your life forever,they just change right in front of your eyes without even knowing it.I am sure one day you'll find someone special and love will come back into your heart.take care and stay strong

Edwin

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 29, 2008

A heart breaking write Amber and we all have them. I believe when we've been hurt it gets tucked away until one day our memory for some reason decides to bring it into view for our muse to ponder. Thank you for sharing.

Newfioe hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 29, 2008

Such a heart-rendering appeal. Rejection of any kind is a great trauma and you express that in your poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Yes, Y is a crooked lette, but the question sometimes has to be asked, just to relieve our burden. Wonderfully written poem, Amber!

ET

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Amber, that old thing called "love" will always come back to haunt the heart and soul of the one who lost their true love. It's sad though when you never know "why" one just walked away. It keeps one searching their mind to reason things out. I do hope true love knocks at your door again and brings you the happiness you deserve. A great writing.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Amber that's a big question that many
women asked themselves why?
then one day guy realised he made a mistake
By then is too late!
Amber you are a beautiful young woman
Live and dream and look too a brighter future!
Beautifully writing and expressed feelings
Outstanding piece!!
Peace love and Light...and hugsss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Amber, I might tell the young woman in this poem
that some guys are absurdly stupid. I doubt that
she will have a long wait to find someone to fill
his shoes. If that's what she wants. -gene.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

In darkness of these memories your heart aches to know love, but not this love which knows such abandon, an imposter of love....
No man should ever measure so small to deny anyone from the truth
A Real Man Will Honor Himself To Love YOU Deservingly!
I crindge reading your emotional poem & the grief which burdens broken hearts like this
Emotional Write
Much Love & Inspirational Healing
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

I once heard -when one love dies another love opens a door-I pray that true love will find the path to your heart forevermore

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

When one dies inside, they must begin to live again inside,,,as one as you deserves nothing less!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Whenever a relationship goes bad or someone wants out, it may not always be us who are the problem, many times, if we were doing our part--becoming the best of us--the other is the one that lags and eventually is left behind, but instead of catching up to you, they sometimes quit...wonderful poem

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

Many through the ages have sadly wondered, 'Why.'

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 28, 2008

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! THERE IS ONE ANSWER: A MAN, WHO CAN LEAVE AMBER MOONSTONE, A LADY WITH BEAUTIFUL, POMANTIC SOUL, A VERY TALENTED POET....THAT MAN IS NOT ON YOUR LEVEL, THAT MAN DID NOT DESERVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 27, 2008

Oh boy, all the sentiments of a scorned love, when all is not equal. So many questions, yet no answers to unfold, sadly life goes on and another scar etched into the heart....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on June 27, 2008

" Tell Me Why " expresses the desire for one to know why mutual love was not embraced. The questions " was i not a good lover? was i a bad cook? was i a bad mother? " expresses the gravitation towards perfection, so that one may be more prepared for a long term relationship in the future. This is good soul searching, for good reasons ...to be better than before ... to be ready for the future. Good work Amber !!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 27, 2008

Let bygones be bygones dearest Amber
Live for today and hope for a brighter futer
Love & peace be with you

William