I See You (poem) by Don Juan Amante on AuthorsDen

I See You
by Don Juan Amante → (All Poetry by Don Juan Amante)
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I SEE YOU we are all needy people in search of ourselves on a quest to become more than we might see in the mirror of our mind we all deal with negatives insecurities, loneliness we attempt to hide it but alone in the darkness we confront our specters beware of those who portray themselves as having it "all together� they don�t and they can�t be your savior the world is filled with those who promise love happiness, fulfillment users of the innocent destroyers of the heart better to be alone than to be ravaged by deceit choose wisely the ones to whom you open doors and gift with your truth god made you beautiful someone along life�s way convinced you he didn�t but inside and outside your magnificence shines god made you strong in your heart of hearts you understand it is so i see you behind the mask and thank god for the vision DJA 3/30/2010

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 31, 2010

THIS IS A GOOD WORK...IN BRINGING OUT THE FACT THAT WE 'ALL' 'COME SHORT', YOU HAVE ENCOURAGED THE 'TIMID' WHO HASN'T YET REACHED THE PLACE OF 'FREEDOM' IN THEIR WRITING...AND PERHAPS, 'BELLOWED' AT LITTLE AT THOSE WHO FEEL THEY HAVE. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by The Poetess

Reviewed on March 30, 2010

Absolutely beautifully written and felt. This deeply touched my heart. Oh how I can relate. But I decided to not hide what most don't want to see. Its here in my "story".

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Don Juan,

This brought tears to my eyes -- thank you. You saw me. The real me.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

DJ,
What a magnificent poem you have written. Such visionary masterpiece. To "see" is a true gift. One must always strive for clear vision.
I love this poem and all it stands for! I am so hoping no one broke that beautiful heart of yours..

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"