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Nocturne (with Felix Perry)
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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This poem was inspired by the Whistler painting "Nocturne." It was written by Felix Perry and myself.


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Seconds split the quiet, before she sees him through the grey,

the morning fog lifts for a moment, then finally breaks the day,

around the bends and subtle curves of water’s shifting moods,

pale flesh beneath thin cotton awaits their passion’s interludes

Anchors raise o’er scarlet days as he waves goodbye once more

to she who’s waited patiently in their love nest upon the shore

the buoy bell rings and the seagulls sing, ‘tis time to be away

turns his back and don’t look back, aye ‘tis time to earn his pay

She puts much ink to paper in her diary and to fill her dreams,

of better days where they share time, even though it seems,

that time passes as swiftly as the tides that pull his ship away,

leaving her with four bare walls and more time to sit and pray

Looking down at his calloused hands of old and worn out leather

smiles thinking of a summer day, of her naked in the purple heather

‘till the sea his demanding mistress, calls out once more his name

blows to shore another kiss, a goodbye wish, until they meet again

The feel of his rough old hands dancing upon her fair young skin,

is her memory’s one pure delight, though some may call it sin,

she knows full well, that she would wait, forever for those very hands,

when he returns from distant shore, in their cottage on shifting sands

"Oh my love, you've come home again" she whispered and held him tight,

"Better our love in fleeting moments, then a loveless wedding night."

He spoke of love in soft kisses, hoping they would last until another day

"Aye sweet lass, I’ll love you, till the tides takes me back to stay…"

 


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 Reviews of "Nocturne (with Felix Perry)"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
A lovely, sensual piece. You complement each other nicely. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Such a perfect write! The split between the love of a woman and the call of the Empress of the sea...an age old conflict that still goes on today. Much enjoyed this one.
All good things to you and yours,
Jim

Reviewed by MIchael Mullins
Reviewed on November 27, 2008
I really like this. I feel the passion in you. Wonderful.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 26, 2008
Michelle, you and Felix appear to be a matched set in lovely poetry -- this collaboration is indeed a marvelous write -- as smooth as freshly oiled young maiden's skin -- peace and love to you -- JMW

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
I was going to say what Tom said,

""Brandy, you're a fine girl,
what a good wife you would be,
but my life, my love, and my lady is the sea..."

The painting looks like Nessie in the middle of the foggy loch...
Like a mysterious woman appearing from the shadows and then disappearing again.

Interesting piece, far more complex than I myself have the talent to write. Well done, Poetess!

Rockie Coppolella

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
The hardships and worry as a love one goes off to sea, longing to be in each others arms again... beautiful work you two!
Christine

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
I echo Dawn: The two of you write beautifully together. -gene.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Michelle, this is a VERY sweet and loving poem I really enjoyed reading BUT at the end wondered who this man loved more - the sea or the woman. Just my thoughts.
Doug

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
This is just incredible work. There isn't much more that I can say...except it's a keeper...another into my library! The two of you write beautifully together!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
Wow, what a wonderful masterpiece, creative art through the talents of both of you. Thought I was hearing the words of an old sea captain feeling, hearing the lure of the ocean...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
Ho Ho Ho...and a bottle of Rum... this poem was lovely and made me want to sing along with a melody that haunted thru-out the words...like lyrics... Fee...take out the guitar...find a melody...this is lovely... Well done by both of you... nice collaboration. lindalaw

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
beautiful and nicely visual--congrats to you both

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
Excellent write by two excellent writers. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
Wonderful flow and rhythm, you guys. Excellently penned.
Love to you both,
Becca~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
This "hits pretty close to home" for me. Nicely done. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on November 23, 2008
MICHELLE - Ma Belle - tre bien ensemble!

Excellent story and portrait of lover's trysts.

I can almost hear the words of the song -

"Brandy, you're a fine girl,
what a good wife you would be,
but my life, my love, and my lady is the sea..."

Tom.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2008
I absolutely love this poem . . . It is a keeper . . . You have taken love of the one as opposed to the other . . . The hands . . . Those rough, old hands . . . And the tender, oh soo tender skin they do touch with a man's lust for a woman . . . The ache in her heart as the years march on by her, the wait is not to horrible because she knows the result of the waiting are those rough, old hands . . . I fucking love this . . .


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