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Eve's Reflection
by Dawn Richerson → (All Poetry by Dawn Richerson)
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Mired in maze of my temperamental mind
are memories of our garden before the snake
and jumbled mess of me he left behind.

   Thin, cylindrical body slides so smooth still in memory.

Who sinned first? Is it I? Am I the one to blame?
Easier to damn some sinister other,
slithering serpent, devil in disguise.

    You tasted, too, of forbidden fruit those fair, but fateful, days.  

Then you pointed snaking finger, abandoned me,
shaking your head in disappointment, chiding
me for womanly weakness, wormhole will.

    But I fished mirrored images out of your sad sea-green eyes.

Through years that followed Fall I came to understand
shared pain in falling short, failing Creator
and one another, losing Eden ours.

    I have borne my pain and now embrace all creation anew.

You, my Adam, meant to be first and last are all
that’s missing in my world of healing, changing,
growing, state of grace. Come, let us worship.

    Let us ask forgiveness together, and let’s start fresh this day.

Take my hand. Walk with me boldly into future
God has planned for us, and let us make our home
in garden God provides, our love restored.




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 Reviews of "Eve's Reflection"
Reviewed by Virago DeSante
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
inspired write.
gorgeous, and I mean GORGEOUS imagry
"But I fished mirrored images out of your sad sea-green eyes."
bitter sweet beauty

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
Excellent write, Dawn. Really.

Reviewed by Elaine Carey
Reviewed on August 26, 2004
I love the picture of restoration here. Your craft keeps it true and beautiful.

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
wow... this is beautiful... I agree with Zinta... it shimmers underneath the skin as you read it... so full of story yet elegant as well... :)

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
Dawn...outstanding write....very creative write....one of your very best...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on August 25, 2004
This is the sort of poem that shimmers underneath the skin as you read it. Then makes you read it twice. And again.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Oh my Lord this sound SO much like global newscasts :-P
Talks about innocence, messin' up, awareness and forgiveness in one fell swoop. And as this poem says that you've created, purity is renewable.

blessin's Sis,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed on August 24, 2004
(((dawn)))

this is exeptional in creativity and complexity; a true marvel! BRAVA! i'm saving this one to savor again and again :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Fantastic voice and imagery. I felt like I was there watching creation, its changes and now its new beginnings. Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Awesome imagery Dawn!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Beautiful Dawn! I loved your poem so much, outstanding!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Forgiveness and Re-Awakening; true keys to life. Extremely powerful poem, Dawn.

Reviewed on August 24, 2004
In the lake of poetic fishing, This is a keeper

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
Twas ever thus... women, the meeker and gentle and yet imbued with the ability to take responsibility and control - in the nicest possible way, of course! This absolves, cleanses and nurtures and shows a true Eve-like maternal and spousely quality. I love the sense of soliloquy in it, too: Eve's Reflection! The visual first brought to my mind a backbone, a spine, which is what also undergirds the strength of this write - cleverly in the shape of the opposing, "sneaky" spineless snake! Great optimism in this "onward and upward" piece. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 24, 2004
awesome imagery from an inspired pen ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
This is a beauty.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
What a splendid poem Dawn! An inspired write crafted with
brilliant imagery!


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