Dawn...your poems are like the rivers flowing towards the sea...I often wonder how you are able to get eternal flow in every write of yours...I salute you...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Dawn, the image is exquisite. The poem speaks to me. Being on the edge of something yet never taking the step forward...it happens. Life can be strange.
sometimes we loose focus of what our goals are in life and so end up in a suspended state of animation ... though we know we are looking for we fail to grasp its elusive form and so loose our desire to make things happen ... i really like the flow and voice in this poem and its inner meaning ...
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2004
Dawn, one can easily take the well beaten path, yet in order to grow beyond the norm, one should also vary ones journey to find the necessary strength when needed to overcome the trails and tribulations in life. Outstanding work my friend. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
good spare poem about drifting, being on the edge of something, a precipice? Not waving but drowning, life can have you over a barrel
but there's freedom and courage in leading the unplanned wandering life so I have total sympathy for the character portrayed here, out there taking his chances against the odds, on the edge.
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Great writing!
Gina
PROFOUND
WILLIAM ....PEACE
but there's freedom and courage in leading the unplanned wandering life so I have total sympathy for the character portrayed here, out there taking his chances against the odds, on the edge.
Carmen
Excellent piece!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Reindeer
God Bless
Michelle~
Love Tinka