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rip tide
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not as a spiral
nor an energy vortex
it felt like a rip tide
swimming against
 


couldn’t swim through it
would just pull me down
no way to fight it
because i’ll just drown
 


better to paddle, away from its flow
take a parallel current, along the shore
 


mortality how gothic
so film noir
haunted by shadows
they cry in the dark
 


life imitates art
its sadness seeps through
what they don’t see
I know that you do
 


feeling your heart, comforting to me
always so bright, always with love
 


I thank you, from all my heart
keeping me thinking, of happy thoughts


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "rip tide"
Reviewed on March 26, 2004
great, great a turn on and very entertaining. peace. G

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 25, 2004
wonderful poem of compassionate camaraderie ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
Beautiful!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
Beautiful poem Debby!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2004
"life imitates art
its sadness seeps through
what they don’t see
I know that you do'

Lovely lines Debby...beautiful poem..floria


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