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dangling thoughts
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my mind wanders into realms
of dangling thoughts
unfinished continuances
stories without ends
particles of ideas
unsharpened rules
abandoned effects
and moments of genius
 
magical energy
sweeps my dream webs
from sleeping to living
i’ve seen the power of
creations experience
and respect inner guidance
possibilities so infinite
and outcomes extreme
 
sometimes it seems so
incredibly important
I feel my teeth clench
in determination
yet really it is all
just dreams, just existence
just playtime
fatigued I rest on the points
 
made by my perception
and of course I wonder
as my mind wanders into realms
of mysterious unknowns
waiting discovery of the
words dangling mid air
pending existence
into another poem


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 Reviews of "dangling thoughts"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
A great expression of thoughts, dreams, the here and now. Your words provide images ! ......M

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
nice ...this view of thoughts dangling within existence till they land within our minds and we express their display within poetry...

enjoyed .....Art Sun...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
i enjoyed dangling within your introspection ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Denny, your dangling thoughts came together to provide a brilliant poem and I'm sure it will lead to more of the same!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
This is quite a journey of the mind, Debby. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Thought tantalize the writer and reader in this one as we comtemplate all the possibilities this write opens up for us to dwell on..

Fee

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Even your "dangles" are worth the read, Debby. The more I read of you the more I fel in touch. This is the story of my life these days. So little time and there is, as you well know, no way to pencil in time for poetry. Poetry has it's own mind and it's own time. Oh the pages of the unfinished I long to feel drawn to or that moment when a word has to be written down or lost forever. Lately, it seems I neither have time nor inclination, but it will return when least expected and I'll be armed and dangerous. In the mean time, (Time?? I wish), I struggle even to complete an unfinished one, much less post or comment. I'm just glad I maded time this morning and connected with you. Love your work, Debby.
xo Taylor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Yip A rollercoaster "mind ride" scrambling and tasting each word to perfection...specially me ...for english NOT my first language!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Yes, Debby! You could be talking about me (and everyone else here at AD), at times. Writing is so extreme -- huge ups and tremendous downs -- words that need to come out, yet must be in the 'right' order to get our deepest thoughts out, from the mind through our fingers. Well done!
Love,
CJ


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