enjoyed the read

A beautiful write. Its essence is captured by images and deep insight.........m

Oh Debbie, do I love your poetry. First I have to tell you when I saw the title in my e-mail reminder I was amused, remembering the title of my father's favorite book about mountain climbing...grizzly at best. What an about face when I read your first line and you took me to the places my mind loves to go....as if i had slipped immediately into yours and wished desperately I could be so bold as to pen the places my mind so privtley takes me lest I smie and divulge them to the one my feet bookend. I have learned so much from this poem and your style, a direction I need dare to take. I thank you so much for your lesson and for your amazing gift of poetry. I want to put you on my people I have to meet in this lifetime list. Now, I just have to go back and read again and again. YUM!
Love,
Taylor

the metaphoric stamina of the ladybug offers a sense of renewal and rebirth bringing this poem into a balanced state of fruition ...

Superb insight and imagery Debby! I love the feeling of timelessness in this poem, and of course I love the ladybug!;-)

Wonderful offering Debby!!

Love Tinka

We can always use these kinds of insights and an infusion of endurance as we navigate lifes challenges. Riveting imagery and a good message Debby.

Light and Wisdom ...

Interesting poem Debbie, I enjoyed. Holly

Fanatastic Write Debi with strong visions and images floating up from the paper as light as the wings of the lady bug you mention.

Fee

A full course meal is served on this poetic tray, and "endurance" sings life.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

I really like the images, here, and I think I love that ladybug's attitude!

Ted

Beautiful expressions in this and visuals. I liked the ending profound.
Peace & Light,
Joselyn