did you ever see one of those grinning moons that Cheshire cat smile hanging over the roof it looks down at you, large in the sky and i think I like it cuz I must look up its like mission control sending down codes travelin rays of embedded transmissions perhaps wondrous knowings of distant Pleiadians I get so excited in spirited moments riding on waves of integration the darkside of the moon lingers above yet the smile of the light is that grin speaking with integrity if you listen
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Reviewed by Dawn Dancer Lilo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2007
amzingly good! the moon has a power all of its own! =p! Lilo
Ahhh, you've chosen to write on one of my favorite subjects...but then the moon seems to hold infinite fascination for most poets. Love this light hearted take on the Moon. You know the moon was out all day here in Tennessee...wearing a sideways smile and playing in the slight stratus clouds. Man in the Moon playing loving tricks, I suspect. What a rascal is he!
Love,
Taylor
Can't wait to show this to my student's tomorrow, we are studying the phases of the moon...one of them called this phase of the moon...God's Thumb Nail...enjoyed this write...amazing what we can hear or see when we listen...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Love,
Taylor
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
giving keys as your ending say "if you listen"
wonderful share!!
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Love Tinka :)