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two lips
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a bit of word play this morning


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pursed at this stage of blossoming
still closed tight yet transforming
painted and glossy
 
planted in fall naked
down in the soil dark and deep
waiting under fallen leaves
sleeping through the frozen shell
cautious, they rise now
curious, determined
awakened and sensuously
full


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 Reviews of "two lips"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
I love the analogy, Debby. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
A unique way of planting, and the blossoming of flowers. Well done .....M

Reviewed on April 3, 2007
great growing Debby, i was looking for lips with teeth but the flowers will do

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on April 2, 2007
Perfection Debby...precisely captured in the romance of spring. So nice to have a moment to read and to discover yet another of your beautiful pieces.
Love,
Tay

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 2, 2007
Gotta love it!!

Happy National Poetry Month !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
Ah, springtime.
Don'cha just love it!!!

Enjoyed reading.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
wonderful analogy and metaphor ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
I can actually see the jump you have taken us on between the lush opening petals of the first spring flowers the the sensuous kiss of a woman's sweet lips. This is special.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
Superb metaphor and word play...Beautifully crafted Debby!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
Beautifully painted...

Thanks
Dan

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
How lovely! Spring awakening with a kiss of tulips - sweet, and a blooming good write, Nicky x

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
Two lips waiting for the first passer by to bend over to smell the scent and get the first kiss of spring.
Great, it brighted my day.
Georg

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
OOOOoooooooooo yes... Can get into this having just writ something similar myself, Debby. But this is deliciously focussed on your floral subject and a delightful tribute to this first flush of spring. I especially love this as, in particular, these blooms just always look ready to receive a kiss on their tip, somehow! :)) LOL Kate

Reviewed on April 1, 2007

The "two lips" abounds in wonders of the magic of Spring.

Happy National Poetry Month.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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