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within a fortress
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within a fortress
i have a room
tasteful but simple
i collapse on the bed
too tired to even undress

waking early
i ventured the hall
and opened the door
to your room

noble you looked
sleeping there flaccid
thinking i'd rise you
with my watering mouth

you stirred in your sleep
muttering something
i did'nt quite get

what would you think
if i pounced upon you
pinning you down with
wild intention
would you respond in animal kind
with wanton need for affection
i salivate at the thought

you stir again
and kick off the sheet
exposing your form and surface
oh, i'd so like to touch
and intimate explore each delicate fold
taking my time to know all it holds
Tantric in its journey

tickled by the thought
i make a move forward
and reach to smooth my hair
i realize then i'd slept in my clothes
my hair is wind blown and sleep tangled

this won't do, how could you
when you love beauty and structure
and perhaps more behaved

so i retreat the door
in search of a bath
and think of the art of seduction



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 Reviews of "within a fortress"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
thank you for the stir, gets my blood flowing

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 7, 2003
wonderful seduction indeed...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 6, 2003
Imagery of erotica perfectly written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Wow Debby, this is to me the epitome of classy erotica!Beautifully done!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
You pronounced erotica perfectly in this write with full depth of poetic justice in mind. Beautifully done, Debby.
Amor

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on September 5, 2003
Nice romantic woulda coulda didn't. I enjoyed the imagery, Debby.


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