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sometimes it feels like a crowded train the bumping and shuffling as they move through the isle the train sways and lurches and they press against you perhaps, innocently so with the excuse me's I'm sorry, and pardon me's given with love, I'm sure yet I'm entranced within the blur of the melding rolling to the rock of the train my thoughts in swirl to the one who loves me always my heart he holds delicately guarded by his tendrils of ivy his roots within my flame

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

This is beautiful!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

TAKE THE A TRAIN
THATS A NEW EXPERIENCE
EXCELLENT WRITE ....DEBBY
ENJOYED MUCH

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on January 13, 2004

Sounds like committment to me, Debby. A brush here, an innocent touch there, only brings images of the other. BTW, very nice poetic expression, too.
Best regards,
Leland

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