Brilliantly Engrossing!
Victoria, take a bow!!
(music included)

Lady Vivian

Your echo chamber and soft voice multiplies the poem and gives it greater meaning. I'm not sure how “gypsum” figures in, but I understand the sweetness of clover.

Ron

The smell of clover is all consuming Victoria and these words with it make music with the waves synergistic!

Beautiful!
Teresa

Great one, Victoria.

Source of new energy and consciousness, this manifesto is Jungian...to Jung it was The Key. Although he couldn't give any rational explanation of what The Key meant, he felt it meant something to him. Accordingly, when he came across such a symbol in his treatment, instead of analyzing it away, he encouraged the patient to amplify it, to seek what The Key meant to him, where the unconscious appeared to prove itself...so in essence, where are the sound of the wind chimes coming from? Where is that door? What is the mystery in the ancient river beds? What does mineral gypsum and clover represent so strongly that it appears in poem? You are The Voice of Ages and the echo is vocal premonition...

Yours xoxo

No sound on my end but poem was a delight.

excellent presentation
most enjoyable listening
Love & Peace be with you

William

Ahhh, feeling the full effects of cheap California burgundy, and the recording uplifted me "Along the ancient river beds," and I love "Opening another door." I know all about the gutter . . . er . . . sorry, it is grotto, and don't know so much about that. I do know I loved this one immensely.