I love the way you turn what has been perhaps thought of as a frustrating axiom for many of us (with its annoying inference of passivity!) into something so positively active in terms of hastening the arrival of those "good things", Dawn. We can be slow to learn that time isn't so much about hours/months distance ahead, but more about circumstantial "rightness". As always, so much wrung from so few words. Excellent! :)) xx
Dawn - Enjoyed your appropriately titled "To Ride A Wave" and its expression of the paradox of the fortunes of life which often begin one way and end in another as in:
Wow Beautiful eloquent display of wisdom
Dawn your words are so peaceful and tender
I love this Piece!!
Brilliant!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light…Yolie
Nice work Dawn...life is ever changing pattern, it is when we least expect it that change becomes the reality we wait for, the dreams that become gifts, and the calmness of joys that we cherish...
I like this one Dawn...a dedication well deserving to the recepient...
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2009
So lovely; this person for whom you write is blessed by your words.
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2009
Very well written! Calming words...as is the photo!
A beautiful message to a special 'someone.' What could be better Your poem has a deeper quality, appearing to be the lovely tip of a a fast melting iceberg. If so, I wish you well and much happiness.
Luff, - Bill
The graphic image very aptly complements what is expressed in your verses, Dawn. The intended recipient of your gift is fortunate indeed. Love and best wishes,
Very well said, and the whole poem would make a great sampler framed to put on the wall of an office or den. I feel, even though it is not, that you wrote it for me and I am sure others will feel that way too and that is a good thing.
hugs
I love the sense of hope in this poem. Hugs,
Sheila
Love & peace
William
Lance
Although it seemed as though life had played
a cruel and bitter trick,
he now moves forward with grace
- David
Dawn your words are so peaceful and tender
I love this Piece!!
Brilliant!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light…Yolie
Allen
Sandie Angel :o)
I like this one Dawn...a dedication well deserving to the recepient...
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Rich deep words carry this beautiful message and the pic is perfect
addition to the mood and theme.
John
A beautiful message to a special 'someone.' What could be better Your poem has a deeper quality, appearing to be the lovely tip of a a fast melting iceberg. If so, I wish you well and much happiness.
Luff, - Bill
Regis
Be always safe,
Karen
this moving tribute. I love the photo, as you might expect.
-gene.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And I'm hoping it's who I'm thinking of. :)
Wiht Love,
Cindy
If you are his future, I am sure that it was worth his wait.
Cryssa
Christine
hugs
fee
Yes this is true. Fine lines and finer message! Great poem.
Cynthia
Newfie Hugs, Rose