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The Herd
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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In answer to Julie Shavin's challenge, City of Comfort/City of Discomfort

Photo of Castello Sforzesco in Milan- one of the prettiest spots in the city


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They moved in herds –

curb to bus –

bus to subway.

Eyes straight ahead,

and when one did meet another’s

glance, there was rarely so much

as a hint of a smile.

 

The subway doors crashed open -

the herd pressed forward, oblivious to

jewel colored impatiens that spilled from

terracotta pots and tiny sparrows

nibbling on remains of focacce

on sidewalks of outdoor cafes.

 

I could hear the melody

of a violin in the distance,

and as I drew closer,

I discovered a kinship –

another “straniero” –

not from America, but Albania.

 

The herd passed quickly while I stopped to listen –

a captive audience for the next several minutes.

I dropped a coin into the open guitar case

and received a smile that rivaled the warmth of the sun.

 

And on I walked, a small town girl living in a big city,

thousands of miles from home –

determined to never become a part of the herd.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Herd"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
'FOLLOWING THE CROWD' IS NOT THE ANSWER...'INDIVIDUALITY' IS BEAUTIFUL! WELL WRITTEN AND SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
Yes, it is a very particular and sometimes oppressing experience, to be part of the crowd, especially when, for some reason, you are a foreigner, different, sensitive...
You reminded me of atmospheres of a city (Milan) where I lived many years ago.

Axilea

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 12, 2009
Good for her! Loveley writing

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2009
Amen! One of your very best!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 25, 2009
Reminds of the big Apple's Rat race
Commuter madness, one must either whisper
a song ri one's self or compose a poem
within the sanity of their minds
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 21, 2009
a herd has a life of its own, gathering to its own momentum ... fortunately, as poets we can never be part of a herd, rather part of a larger heard ...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 20, 2009
A poetesses senses at work here. A polished and observant juxtapose of what man has created and become and what nature has always been. My brother and his wife flew over yesterday to Stockholm. They will also be visiting Italy - they love the food.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 19, 2009
Dawn,
This poem has a message that reaches to one's soul. Great scene and sounds, too.
Sheila

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on May 17, 2009
OH yes Dawn, I hear your words. I have never been a part of the herd, even though I lived for 30 years in the "big" city. We make what we make in our lives, and we are the architects of our own existence. Thank you for sharing this wonderful message.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on May 17, 2009
I hear you. Now, thanks to this write Dawn, I know why is was that when I visited exotic isles, I hated going on the tours. I just cannot be a part of the herd. Thank you for this insight. Bless you, J'nia

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 16, 2009
Dawn you say so much in this splendid poem! It feels like
you have let us into the warmth of yourself,thank you.
I would so love to visit Italy!...ET

Reviewed by L Hippler
Reviewed on May 16, 2009
You really capture the time and place here, Dawn.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Dawn,
This poem, for me one of your finest, has a distinct air and presence along with of course a clear and serious theme that truly reaches and touches.
Excellent writing.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
It is amazing but I have walked in big cities and small towns and I learned one thing...if you are friendly more times than not the people you speak to our friendly. I visited Toronto, Montreal and Vancouver over the years and was told that they were all herd mentality cities but you know whenever I spoke with people or asked directions I always seen a smile.

Fee

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Having been a part of the herd, though not in a city with a subway system, it just means "have to has you by the butt" Love the imagery Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Dawn, line for wonderful line, you have captured
the hectic herd mentality which identifies too many
large cities. I especially love that next to last stanza.
I like to walk and pause to look and discover the city,
be it Manhattan or Paris or the town downbeach. -gene.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
You present a stark, real, and sad picture of the city living. At the same time, you also reveal the sunny warmth that is there but ignored by practically everyone rushing along with the "herd." Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
The imagery really speaks a message. A great write, Dawn.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Great pen, Dawn, like that last line...exactly!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Wonderful imagery you invoked with your descriptions...Those who can't/don't take time to smell the roses, so to speak, are the ones that truly lose...There is so much more to life than work and pressing forward...
Cryssa

Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Amen to staying away from the herd mentality. Very well written, Dawn! I love the couple of colorful splashes woven among the black and white description of the herd.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Oh my gosh..I felt like I was bieng trampled as I read this...never did like big crowds..this is a gem of a poem...and one with such a powerful message...so much to see and hear..we just need to open our eyes and ears. :)
Christine

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Dawn Your poem touches me in so many ways. There are so many people that do not see the beauty around them. It is so true that saying, stop to smell the roses..Your poem brought me right to this beautiful place in Milan. I always knew there was a difference between a vacationer and a traveler..I prefer to think of myself as a traveler, I love to smell the roses..
Much love, light and peaceful living.
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
I just love this!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
I'm not familiar with the challenge, but this is an amazing piece...the imagery is wonderful. Michelle

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Oh my..this is very beautiful writing sweet lady..please stay safe and well..OK..Hugsss

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
'I dropped a coin into the open guitar case and received a smille that rivaled the warmth of the sun'----'...Determined to never become a part of the herb'------- BEAUTIFUL SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
a beautiful write-stunning visuals -

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Dawn...this is beautiful...sometimes when we find ourselves in the middle of the herd we have to listen to the music of our heart so we can find our own way in life.this like all you works is outstanding.... Allen

Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Yes I think being yourself and not just following the crowd will give you more receptivity to the view and people around you when going on a trip. Very nice and excellent write.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
I can relate, went through the City of Milan bound for its Railway Central Station about the rush hour that can't be compared with Sausalito's rush hour. A boy from a little town in a big city.
Now in Sweden, long way from home in a little port-town with the same cacophony of a big city that I can't escape from.
"The Herd" takes us back, give us a opportunity to yearn and still have that determination to never be part of "that" herd.

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
Good for you, the herd misses so much, including things like flowers, birds, music, and this wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
A vivid picture that trapezes both within and without of this City's walls, inside the internal landscape as well as painted on a beautiful ancient/modern external scene. Love the mergings and divergencies in this piece, Dawn; you set up all the dichotomies and emotional conflicts well. You are just excellent at walking us through your thoughts, feelings and tangible observations; it's as though I stroll arm in arm with you... responding in the same ways, I'm sure! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
Yeah Dawn! May we never forget to see, hear, feel all around us!
We too are flowers... all of us beautiful especially when appreciated!
Beautiful piece!
Love and Smiles,
Suzie xox :-D

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
How easy it is to not see the beauty surrounding us each over-booked hectic day! At least the three-hour mid-day break deserves to be instituted around the globe! It appears that the technology meant to make lives easier has had the reverse effect.
Nicely penned, Dawn.
Always a pleasure,
Carolyn


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