'FOLLOWING THE CROWD' IS NOT THE ANSWER...'INDIVIDUALITY' IS BEAUTIFUL! WELL WRITTEN AND SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Yes, it is a very particular and sometimes oppressing experience, to be part of the crowd, especially when, for some reason, you are a foreigner, different, sensitive...
You reminded me of atmospheres of a city (Milan) where I lived many years ago.
Reminds of the big Apple's Rat race
Commuter madness, one must either whisper
a song ri one's self or compose a poem
within the sanity of their minds
Love & peace
a herd has a life of its own, gathering to its own momentum ... fortunately, as poets we can never be part of a herd, rather part of a larger heard ...
A poetesses senses at work here. A polished and observant juxtapose of what man has created and become and what nature has always been. My brother and his wife flew over yesterday to Stockholm. They will also be visiting Italy - they love the food.
Blessings ...
OH yes Dawn, I hear your words. I have never been a part of the herd, even though I lived for 30 years in the "big" city. We make what we make in our lives, and we are the architects of our own existence. Thank you for sharing this wonderful message.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
I hear you. Now, thanks to this write Dawn, I know why is was that when I visited exotic isles, I hated going on the tours. I just cannot be a part of the herd. Thank you for this insight. Bless you, J'nia
Dawn,
This poem, for me one of your finest, has a distinct air and presence along with of course a clear and serious theme that truly reaches and touches.
Excellent writing.
John
It is amazing but I have walked in big cities and small towns and I learned one thing...if you are friendly more times than not the people you speak to our friendly. I visited Toronto, Montreal and Vancouver over the years and was told that they were all herd mentality cities but you know whenever I spoke with people or asked directions I always seen a smile.
Having been a part of the herd, though not in a city with a subway system, it just means "have to has you by the butt" Love the imagery Excellent write. Liz
Dawn, line for wonderful line, you have captured
the hectic herd mentality which identifies too many
large cities. I especially love that next to last stanza.
I like to walk and pause to look and discover the city,
be it Manhattan or Paris or the town downbeach. -gene.
You present a stark, real, and sad picture of the city living. At the same time, you also reveal the sunny warmth that is there but ignored by practically everyone rushing along with the "herd." Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes,
Wonderful imagery you invoked with your descriptions...Those who can't/don't take time to smell the roses, so to speak, are the ones that truly lose...There is so much more to life than work and pressing forward...
Cryssa
Amen to staying away from the herd mentality. Very well written, Dawn! I love the couple of colorful splashes woven among the black and white description of the herd.
Oh my gosh..I felt like I was bieng trampled as I read this...never did like big crowds..this is a gem of a poem...and one with such a powerful message...so much to see and hear..we just need to open our eyes and ears. :)
Christine
Dawn Your poem touches me in so many ways. There are so many people that do not see the beauty around them. It is so true that saying, stop to smell the roses..Your poem brought me right to this beautiful place in Milan. I always knew there was a difference between a vacationer and a traveler..I prefer to think of myself as a traveler, I love to smell the roses..
Much love, light and peaceful living.
Amber "V"
'I dropped a coin into the open guitar case and received a smille that rivaled the warmth of the sun'----'...Determined to never become a part of the herb'------- BEAUTIFUL SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Dawn...this is beautiful...sometimes when we find ourselves in the middle of the herd we have to listen to the music of our heart so we can find our own way in life.this like all you works is outstanding.... Allen
Yes I think being yourself and not just following the crowd will give you more receptivity to the view and people around you when going on a trip. Very nice and excellent write.
I can relate, went through the City of Milan bound for its Railway Central Station about the rush hour that can't be compared with Sausalito's rush hour. A boy from a little town in a big city.
Now in Sweden, long way from home in a little port-town with the same cacophony of a big city that I can't escape from.
"The Herd" takes us back, give us a opportunity to yearn and still have that determination to never be part of "that" herd.
A vivid picture that trapezes both within and without of this City's walls, inside the internal landscape as well as painted on a beautiful ancient/modern external scene. Love the mergings and divergencies in this piece, Dawn; you set up all the dichotomies and emotional conflicts well. You are just excellent at walking us through your thoughts, feelings and tangible observations; it's as though I stroll arm in arm with you... responding in the same ways, I'm sure! :)) TY Kate xx
Yeah Dawn! May we never forget to see, hear, feel all around us!
We too are flowers... all of us beautiful especially when appreciated!
Beautiful piece!
Love and Smiles,
Suzie xox :-D
How easy it is to not see the beauty surrounding us each over-booked hectic day! At least the three-hour mid-day break deserves to be instituted around the globe! It appears that the technology meant to make lives easier has had the reverse effect.
Nicely penned, Dawn.
Always a pleasure,
Carolyn
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You reminded me of atmospheres of a city (Milan) where I lived many years ago.
Axilea
Commuter madness, one must either whisper
a song ri one's self or compose a poem
within the sanity of their minds
Love & peace
William
Blessings ...
This poem has a message that reaches to one's soul. Great scene and sounds, too.
Sheila
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
you have let us into the warmth of yourself,thank you.
I would so love to visit Italy!...ET
This poem, for me one of your finest, has a distinct air and presence along with of course a clear and serious theme that truly reaches and touches.
Excellent writing.
John
Fee
the hectic herd mentality which identifies too many
large cities. I especially love that next to last stanza.
I like to walk and pause to look and discover the city,
be it Manhattan or Paris or the town downbeach. -gene.
Regis
Cryssa
Christine
Much love, light and peaceful living.
Amber "V"
Now in Sweden, long way from home in a little port-town with the same cacophony of a big city that I can't escape from.
"The Herd" takes us back, give us a opportunity to yearn and still have that determination to never be part of "that" herd.
Georg
We too are flowers... all of us beautiful especially when appreciated!
Beautiful piece!
Love and Smiles,
Suzie xox :-D
Nicely penned, Dawn.
Always a pleasure,
Carolyn