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Fruition
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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We strive for permanence,

trying to hold on to

that which we know,

in fear of the unfamiliar,

often remaining idle,

seeking comfort in

the uncomfortable…

becoming not what we are meant to be,

but that which we choose.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Fruition"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 10, 2009
an excellent pen
Peace & Love

William

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 31, 2009
Yes. We all get stuck. These words are wise indeed!
Sheila

Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
I love this one. A truth we all know and live with.

Stay well and keep writing

Ed

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
isn't that the truth...someone please break the cycle
enjoyed

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
YOU KNOW HOW I LOOK AT THINGS DAWN...'ALL THINGS WORK TOGETHER FOR GOOD TO THEM THAT LOVE GOD AND ARE CALLED ACCORDING TO 'HIS' PURPOSE'
...SOMEHOW...GOD WILL WORK IT OUT. BUT....IF ONE DOES NOT HAVE THIS VIEWPOINT...THIS IS A VERY SAD POSITION TO BE IN INDEED...WITHOUT EVEN BEING AWARE OF IT. VERY NICE WORK...MAKES THE READER STOP AND THINK. THANKS FOR THE SHARE AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 20, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Excellent wisdom in truthful lines, Dawn, well done. That pic is gorgeous, as well.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Great insight, Dawn, our demons and choices and uncertainties put out there and evaluated in well expressed lines.

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
sadly, that which we know is rarely permanent; there is no such thing as the status quo, however much the conservative in us might wish it; the goal posts are always shifting. Conservatism is a noose around the neck - we stifle that which we try to maintain. And also most certainly we choose to stay safe within the toxically uncomfortable, crazy with the devils we know rather than the devils we don't, harvesting our own bitter crop. In seeking fruitfulness and abundance, we need to positively step beyond the stony ground... you've got me preaching to myself here, Dawn! Bless you - always a mind-matrix of which I'm very fond xx

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Dawn, So creatively expressed. It's all about putting that next foot out there, whatever direction that may be. Thank you for sharing. Carin'

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
You pack a lot of wisdom into these few lines, Dawn.
We who hesitate, etcetera....

-gene.

Reviewed by L Hippler
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
"Seeking comfort in the uncomfortable" That was perfect. I think you caught it all in that single line, Dawn.
Larry

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Your photo goes so beautifully with your words. I agree that so often we strive to hold onto what we have--when we would have so much more if we would let go and allow ourselves to fly...
Cryssa

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Dawn - Like the irony of the title which reflects our tendency to fear the unfamiliar even when the familiar is not satisfactory as in:

seeking comfort in

the uncomfortable…

becoming not what we are meant to be,

but that which we choose.

Thought provoking. - David

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Very sage advice filtering through the lovely colours of this poem with such truth. Unless forced to move forward we will stagnate until life and all it's adventures pass us by.

fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Deep. Understandable. Sad.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
....so right on Dawn...and this is so true in all stages of our life and growth....I love this poem and will read it again as it really hits home
Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Holding the open umbrella against the storm's grab or letting it go before it takes us down?...choices...

Georg


Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Dawn, you have been reading my latest poetry, Life is all about choices and we must strive for making better choices in order to live fulfilled. Nicely written, very inspirational.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
there is so much to this write, dawn-such a beautiful and profound piece

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Yes, the seasons do bring variations of mood. With the first cold spell here in FL where I live, calling for the heater to be turned on, I am completely aware that my mood is different than it was during hot sunny days. I love sleeping late in the cozy warmth of the comforter tucked about me.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on October 19, 2009
Delightful piece, Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 18, 2009
Excellent philisophical offering, Dawn!great perception...


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