Flow of Thought (poem) by Dawn Anderson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 1, 2010

Love the first verse, as I can deeply relate. The rest is wonderful also.

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

when I search within my soul
for peace of mind
I try to remember something
You have recited somewhere along the line
in this Den Of true artistic poets
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 18, 2010

Even unwanted thoughts can blend within the poetic mind, reminding us of the clarity we seek...

nice work Dawn...

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 16, 2010

Well done, dawn. A great inspiration, we get from reading your works

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 11, 2010

Thoughtful and real, Dawn. Well done.
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 10, 2010

This expresses so much, Dawn; your words compel me to read your verses again... Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 9, 2010

There is wisdom in this
that I can well relate to.
Regards ...
richard

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2010

Yes, it is indeed a high ideal aspiring to be a deliberate thinker and, therefore, a deliberate creator.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

I LOVE THIS METAPHORIC WORK...AND IT IS SO TRUE. OUT THEY GO AND JUST WHEN YOU THINK YOU'VE GOTTEN RID OF THEM FOR GOOD... IN THEY COME AGAIN! OH WELL...SUCH IS LIFE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

Well said Dawn. J'nia

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

Yes! I love this, Your poem evokes a bright mosaic of thoughts ~ and it is not an easy task to greet all thoughts at the door and send the ones not bearing gifts away ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 6, 2010

Thoughts can be liniment or salt on the wound.
Excellent writing!

Georg

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Well said. Brilliant poem.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Beautiful write and image; well done, Dawn!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

WOW, Dawn -- undone by the truth in these lines! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

A woman's work is never done, God bless all of them.

George

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

wisdom message in this gem, Dawn!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Clever Dawn, read this a few times really ingenious~

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Ahhhh, that busy mind never rests and we have to channel it else it wanders where it will.

Reviewed by L Hippler

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

"Overstaying their welcome like ill mannered guests. -- I loved that.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

love the meticulous housekeeping metaphor!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Almost Zen like feeling from ths one of a relaxed mind flow...well done Dawn
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Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Dawn,

great metaphors about how the mind works.

Mary

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

i like this, in the end, a smile

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Unsolicited thoughts can be quite disturbing.

Reviewed by David Maclellan

Reviewed on July 5, 2010

Discipline of one's mind is a powerful accomplishment, and one that I have been unable to master! I can keep some thoughts at bay with conscious effort, but as soon as I let my guard down they will sneak in to be ruminated like it or not LOL. Loved the poem, Dawn.
warm regards, David