Swans part the lilies
and glide under the willows
new life in their wake.
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Reviews of "The Swans (A Haiku)"
Reviewed by coni lea harris (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
thank you, this brings back cgildhood memories
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2002
I love Haiku's! and this one is exceptional.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2002
Just lovely!
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2002
Eventhought the write was too little .. it gave a lot ... Thanks ...
Reviewed by Victoria Walters (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2002
AAAAAAAH!!!!!!! What an incredibly GORGEOUS picture!!! I've said it before and I'll say it again-I love swans, and sooner or later, everything relates back to swans.
Reviewed by Michelle Hudson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
This is graceful beauty you have depicted well with your poetry.
beautiful!
~ Michelle
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
Beautiful picture and nice poem. Very touching and sweet. Bill
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"Murder isn't usually this
beautiful!
~ Michelle
hugs
krissy
Cheers
Allain
Lovely picture, too.
Great work Marilyn!!!!!
Also, thank you for
your beautiful review...
I thought of how beautiful that would
of it in with my poem
at the ending...
Thanks,
Trixie
May Lu $*_*$