Sonic Juice (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 2, 2003

ha! This was excellent, loved every word, and that last line, Killer...

Reindeer

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

Marilyn, My God
Love the animated drawing, the punishment and the "juice"
I guess I lose
Excellent write

William

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 30, 2003

wow....this is sweet and hot write...I loved this....thank u.....BHUWAN

Reviewed by William Heffner

Reviewed on July 29, 2003

Beware of where you drink, your thirst may destroy you.

Thanks for sharing and it's too bad the horns aren't always visible, resistance would be easier.

Keeping the faith

Officer William Heffner

Reviewed by Charles

Reviewed on May 8, 2003

Marilyn, this is very erotic.....a fantasy that many have....enjoyed reading it a lot!

Reviewed by me

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

quite erotic and sensual - i need further explanation - perhaps even a demostration

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2003

Wow, is this erotic! We men love to be dominated! Great Write

Tony:)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Let me drown in tender sweetness any day. I am impressed by this write.
Amor

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

WOW WEEEE Marilyn,
Quite some write..lol
I loved it....

Trixie

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Had to smile...
"What a way to go!!"
Creative fun...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

ooo, you are a bad girl! That's good Marilyn :-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Great poem on domination.

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

wow hee hee not a monster huh?LOL ill die in laughterLOL what an awesome poem you are surely amazing with poetry and taht picture was even better gret job on thisone

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

"at least you'll die in sweetness" wow..you know how to write em and how to end em...Floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

Great>>>>> :)))

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

She devil?.....

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on February 20, 2003

Great animations. Wonderful, powerful write.

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

WOW! I wish I could make up the rule! Wouldn't life be grand? Great write. LM

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

Powerful lady you are..
The poor sap....
The gal in the pic is a babe, but
she's got to shed the horns......

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

Wow! Loves the way she struts her stuff! Enjoy girl! Awesome write sweets! honihoni - Tee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

Well, I won't say aggressive woman...I'll use the word assertive instead. I sure hope Mister ted sheridan sees this after his write. Very well put. Like I always say, "Well behaved women rarely make history."
love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

love this write, you sassy little thing you! wish i could walk like that without limpin' like a penguin; and look like that to boot! WOW! :) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

Oh Marilyn this is so good. die in sweetness.
lol
love it
peg

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 19, 2003

oh, my my my my MY! LOL adorable write...you little minx, you! :) and that killer strut...WOW, some guy's eyes are gonna be going BOINNNNGGG...LOL love this excellent, sassy write...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *still laughing* man, i wish i could walk like that...wish i looked like that...grrrrr *green tinge of jealousy* HA