Screaming Eyes (Inspired by Jay Chattin) (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Hi Marilyn,
Looks like the creature
I found under my bed lastnight...hehehe

Great write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Wow I'm impressed, gave me major cold chills!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 30, 2003

Wonderful, chilly write...brrrrrrrrrrrr..............

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Perfect for Halloween Marilyn, chilling to the bone and so well written.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

what can i say, but....*YIPES*!!! Geeez, gurl, whatta you trying to DO...feed my nightmare machine??? If I have ANY bad dreams tonight, I am holding YOU and SIR JAY responsible! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :0

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Marilyn,
I love this, excellent flow! And the pic.,
I swear there was a movie I watched when I was
a kid, for the life of me I can't remember the name,
but that pic of that doll looks just like the
one from the movie. It came to life and was killing
everyone, I was so scared my father had to take me
over my grandmother's to sleep! lol!
This is perfect for the holiday!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

WoW!! Girl this is spooky!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

(((YIPE)))

*trembling in abject horror*

great, gripping, terrifying write *and that pic*

they don't call jay the "creepmeister" for nuthin'--some of his scary writes have fed my nights with terror *thanks a LOT*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :0

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Love the rhyme and vivid picture you have painted with your poem

George

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Creepy and chilling. Great write!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Oh my this is scary and the picture gives me the shivers.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Ooooooooo!.....this is spooky!!!!!! This scares me too!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

gets right down the the darkest fears
But how did you get a pic of my ex mother in-law

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

Scary nightmares, Marilyn. I can only hope it never returns. Excellent work. :)
Amor

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 29, 2003

very chilling write... well done! (i remember that creature from a series of short horror tales on television, many years ago)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Spooky, spooky, glad it was just a dream...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

This is chilling and that picture scary.
Well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Marilyn this is outstanding! Perfect for halloween, a really chilling write, this will haunt for sure;-)(Jay you really know how to inspire soul bud;-) hehehe...some music M.Yikes!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

This was chilling, reminded me of a movie I saw once, outstanding!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Screaming eyes, distorted faces

Skinless hands from unknown places

Reaching up to take a hold

Wanting to consume my soul

All my sins come hurling back

Disguised as crows and dressed in black

Cawing, taunting, flying ‘round

Transfusing ooze for my blood to drown

Scary write....brilliant!!!