Where Is The Love (poem) by Bella Russell on AuthorsDen

Where Is The Love
by Bella Russell → (All Poetry by Bella Russell)
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The battles always choose which one of us will lose. Broken love
The battles always choose, Just which one of us will lose. Caught between love and hate, Saying you are sorry is now too late. Words from your lips strike their blow. My life is passing in front of me slow. Where is the love we once knew? It made me feel alive as it grew. When you cheated you cast the first stone. You were backing out I should have known. Deep inside I could feel my heart break, As the tears I cried filled my private lake. How can we survive this indiscretion? Can we regain the love and affection? The love songs our hearts sang are all gone, Still this vicious battle for love wages on. How do I go on with a broken heart, As we learn to grow and live apart? I silently watch as you walk out the door, All alone longing for our love to restore. Poetry challenge Broken Love The battles always choose Moderator: TinyTeddy By Bella Russell © 2008 Bella Russell (All rights reserved)

Reviewed by Frances Seymour

Reviewed on April 26, 2010

Bella, This is an incredibly beautiful poem! Blessings...Frances

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 12, 2010

This is very compelling and deals with an all too common theme in this life/world. Thank you, Bella. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on November 10, 2009

Delightfully written, Bella

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on August 11, 2009

That moment that feels like all hope is lost in a relationship is saddest. You captured those feelings here. Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Liz Cosline

Reviewed on January 3, 2009

Loved the poem though sad.

Reviewed by Terry Michaels

You are an artist who paints wonderfully words.
This was a sad ode but beautifully written.
I am touched by this precious gift of yours.

Reviewed by John Marion Francis

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

This is a well written poem of sorrow and paint with a underlining tone of "what do we do now?"

Very delicate piece...

~Jonathon~

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on July 27, 2008

This is a nice work through poem...your thoughts reflect well the emotions of a broken heart...

nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on July 13, 2008

Some very heartfelt poetic feelings being released here. When my first wife died of cancer my world was torn apart. It's hard to equate that with a lover that is still alive. I wrote a short story about he that took 20 years to get out.

Blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on July 6, 2008

Another of your supreme and great heartfelt write, going strong on the den today and I love these pieces of your work. Satisfying to read and anxious for your love to return to you and life will go on better for you.