AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Judith Bailey, iCynth'ya Reed, iGlenda Bixler, iJudy Joy Jones, iCharles Keller, iTichaona Chinyelu, iEva Pasco, iPaul Lonardo, iAnita Shaw, iOdin odin@aflx.com, i

  Home > Health/Wellness > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Eileen Clemens Granfors

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· Messages
· 265 Titles
· 1,437 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2007

Eileen Clemens Granfors, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Balloon
by Eileen Clemens Granfors → (All Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Would this work?


Poem Artwork

Balloon

I bought a clear balloon,

And into it I blew,

Every foul thought, moment of bitterness, anger,

Pain, heartache, doubt, resentment, fear.

The clear balloon turned black and  the skin was tight.

It burst.

I felt free.

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Balloon"
Reviewed on April 27, 2009
I wrote one similar to this several years ago, "I Wish", when I was frustrated with my boss ... it's always good to release. :) Well done, Eileen, nice reading you again!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
nice ... quite unique ...

Reviewed by Sophia Ann Montoya (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
Excellent visual !!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
I like it and love the idea that the mind could do this so easily, when my daughter got married she wrote her maiden name on a white helium balloon and holding my hand she let it go into the night to symbolize her becoming the wife to her husband although she assured me I would always be her star.

Fee

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey
Reviewed on April 26, 2009
Breathe it out!!! I think it might help at least. But I don't know if it turns black. You may a tinge of multiple other hues mixed into the darkness. The trick is to keep that powerful balloon from floating away with you! :-


New Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors
Popular Poetry (Health/Wellness)
  1.  Monster
  2.  The Tutelage of Threadbare Visions...
  3.  Ode To A Kidney Stone
  4.  Forgive Yourself...
  5.  Scary
  6.  Plow/Shares
  7.  IF I SHOULD DIE BEFORE I WAKE...
  8.  CARING HEALTHCARE PROFESSIONALS?
  9.  Healing Center
  10.  Diabetes
  11.  Memory failing
  12.  Obsessions
  13.  Demons in the Distance
  14.  NO ONE MAKES IT !
  15.  Getting Older
  16.  A Caregiver’s Prayer
  17.  Doctoring
  18.  Addictions
  19.  Without Pain
  20.  In The Mirror
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

One Hundred Fart Poems v14 by RickthePoetWarrior

Under-utilized, under estimated, yet understood by everyone the fart is made to odor jest for you.  
Member BookAds

COVID19 SCENE Seen v2 by RickthePoetWarrior

Do you want GUARANTEED IMPUNITY from Covid19 virus? Interest priqued?  
Member BookAds

One Hundred Fart Poems v14 by RickthePoetWarrior

Under-utilized, under estimated, yet understood by everyone the fart is made to odor jest for you.  
Member BookAds