This picture was taken two days after my mother left the family for another man, leaving behind for 6 weeks, broken hearts and fear. Please remember that writers (not reporters) enjoy the privilege of writer's discretion, changing facts to fit their need.
This smiling child grew up in a house without laughter.
She found her comfort in written words, the library’s sanctuary.
Sometimes World Book Encyclopedia had to do.
She learned happiness in Grandmother’s lap.
Listening to poems she couldn’t understand,
But sharing the experience of words and the comfort
Of Grandmother’s Tweed perfume scent and knobby, nubby softness
She chanced upon a lost puppy once. She loved him like a brother.
He ate something set out for dinner,
And was promptly sent away. That’s how her house worked.
She was careful not to ask for anything, to sit still and quiet.
She did not want to be sent away like the puppy.
The small child grows to young adult and more.
Still, she doesn’t rebel. She smiles,
She works. She earns a degree.
Her fears dig more deeply inside her,
Biting, gnawing daring her to dream.
Until one day, a teacher, a martinet behind the lecturn,
Reads her work to the class, saying, “Do you see?
Here is a writer. Here is raw pain.
Here is how you begin.”
One magic moment ignites
The fire that raged inside. And she goes from fiddling with the kindling of words
To freeing memories onto paper, despite the pain,
Opening her eyes, seeking other souls
Those who understand the battle.
Writers write for a reason.
though you experienced personal pain in your past
you persevered through your childhood to this date
always keeping your smile..... love & peace be with you
Very effective portrayal of the source and result of undeserved pain. We hide in words; yet, by some miracle, we gain catharsis from free expression of those words; anchored to the page with only sorrows and pain that we ourselves know the depths of. Thank you for allowing us to know some of those depths. -- Jeff
Effectively cogitated. Your summation is universal; encompassing not only writers, but artists, musicians, sculptors, carpenters, etc.
Continued inspiration... rlc
"Until one day, a teacher, a martinet behind the lecturn,
Reads her work to the class, saying, “Do you see?
Here is a writer. Here is raw pain.
Here is how you begin.”
This is awesome - what a great poem! I'll be reading more of your work!
I don't write for a reason, though I've written alot about the changing seasons, maybe though for a writer this is just so much or so little treason...-e-
A most personal, honest, poignant, expressive and meaningful sharing through your verses, Eileen. I can "feel" what you are sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
~Eileen~
The young gal in the image ~ through so much fear not to be
let go like the puppy. Now your letting go with your eyes
open freeing unique moments of verse.
Wonderfully penned.
It is wonderful when one finds that they are valued.
Strangely, I did not become a writer because of my paralysis. I was a writer well before that because I wanted to express what I experienced and dreamed. But especially what I experienced because it seems so meaningful to relate it. Kudos from my teachers helped a bit, but I would write nonetheless.
A book lives within these words of angst, pain feeling lost in other peoples games. Yet from the leap the eagle is soaring on the thermals of pain release.
Well expressed. Using the 3rd person lifts above the risk of confessional poetry (which for this reader, bores the hell out of me.) You also keenly applied the magic of the 5 senses, arresting in the reader many of his or her own like memories. Kudos.
you persevered through your childhood to this date
always keeping your smile..... love & peace be with you
William
Continued inspiration... rlc
Reads her work to the class, saying, “Do you see?
Here is a writer. Here is raw pain.
Here is how you begin.”
This is awesome - what a great poem! I'll be reading more of your work!
Regis
The young gal in the image ~ through so much fear not to be
let go like the puppy. Now your letting go with your eyes
open freeing unique moments of verse.
Wonderfully penned.
Lady Mary Ann
Strangely, I did not become a writer because of my paralysis. I was a writer well before that because I wanted to express what I experienced and dreamed. But especially what I experienced because it seems so meaningful to relate it. Kudos from my teachers helped a bit, but I would write nonetheless.
Ron