Eroding Dreams (poem) by Cryssa C on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 10, 2009

Sheesh, hasn't anybody read my stories? I thought prevaricates, or prevarication if you will, describes my carreer. Or, perhaps those are lies? Where does one stop and the other start? Ahh, anyway, as always I am intrigued by your well chosen comparisons between feelings and the natural although I suspect in the case of such a beautiful person that the erosion of hope is only an illusion--you truly build up treasures in heaven, and I think you will find that hope has been one of those treasures........Jerry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 9, 2009

A compelling and meaningful write that "speaks" to my soul, Cryssa. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 5, 2009

beautiful and articulate.
Always enjoy

Doug

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on October 24, 2009

Interesting, I've always thought of prevaricate as lying. When I read the line, I said to myself, "prevaricates?". In reading your definition though, it makes complete sense. Thanks for enumerating your words. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 24, 2009

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 23, 2009

A bit soulful Cryssa. Love the word prevaricates. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

BRAVO!: A cry of approval from readers.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Cryssa, this is so lovely.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

interesting and stimulating!

Reviewed by Smita Tewari (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Exquisite imagery! And beautiful flow of language.
Need your e-mail to keep connected!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Superb poetry Cryssa,a fine way you and Karla have chosen,to explore and build your vocabulary!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

I really like your poems with the definitions. Thoroughly enjoyed. Liz

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Dear Cryssa, First I appreciate your footnotes it is a generous consideration for the elderly readers who do not need to dig in their memory. Not everyone is in the age of remembering words once learned in the past.Hope should never erode, although dreams may prove to be futile. The answer to those is faith.Thank you for sharing. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Cryssa~

This is beautifully penned and imaged; you are a master poetess! And I bow to your talents! Very well written; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

Faith, Hope and Love and the greatest of these is Love.Christ says "Love your enemies" Boy I sure need a lot of love for those ruining our Country in DC but I pray for them none the less.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

A two fer, this beautiful challenge. I am learning so much with your challenges. Thank you, Cryssa, excellent poem and love that picture - almost looks like the Northern Lights (or what I'd imagine them to be). Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring

Reviewed on October 21, 2009

The footnotes suggest we're all idiots. well it's a good job you did put them in.. for this one,,lol
Great poem-great style-great scott. I mean great writing!

steve